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Unit -1
BASIC LANGUAGE SKILLS -
VOCABULARY BUILDING
UNIT STRUCTURE
1.0 Objectives
1.1 Introduction
1.2 Antonyms, Synonyms
1.3 Homophones, homonyms
1.4 Collocation
1.5 Changing the Class of Words
1.6 Sample Exercises
1.7 Exercises for Practice
1.0OBJECTIVES
To help the students understand the commonly used Antonyms,
To help the students understand the various sub units of
Vocabulary
Synonyms, Suffixes, Prefixes, Root words, Homophones,
Homonyms and Collocation
To understand how to apply the kno wledge of vocabulary to
solve exercises
1.1INTRODUCTION
Vocabulary is critical to reading success for three reasons:
1.Comprehension improves when you know what the words
mean. Since comprehension is the ultimate goal of reading,
you cannot overestimate t he importance of vocabulary
development.
2.Words are the currency of communication. A robust
vocabulary improves all areas of communication —listening,
speaking, reading and writing.
3.When students improve their vocabulary, their academic and
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1.2ANTONYMS, SYNONYMS
Commonly used Vocabulary
Antonyms are words that have opposite meanings.
Synonyms are words that have the same or nearly the same
meaning. Homonyms are words that are pronounced the same, and
are s ometimes spelled the same, but have different meanings.
Antonym :Examples
Achieve –Fail
Idle–Active
Afraid –Confident
Ancient –Modern
Arrive –Depart
Arrogant –Humble
Ascend –Descend
Attack –Defend
Blunt –Sharp
Brave –Cowardly
Cautious –Careles s
Complex –Simple
Compliment –Insult
Crazy –Sane
Crooked –Straight
Decrease –Increase
Demand –Supply
Destroy –Create
Divide –Unite
Drunk –Sober
Expand –Contract
Freeze -Boil
Full–Empty
Generous –Stingy
Giant –Dwarf
Gloomy –Cheerful
Guilt y–Innocent
Hire –Fire
Include –Exclude
Individual –Group
Innocent –Guilty
Knowledge –Ignorance
Liquid –Solid
Lonely –Crowded
Major –Minor
Marvelous –Terrible
Mature –Immature
Maximum -Minimum
Noisy –Quiet
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Ordinary –Extraord inary
Partial –Complete
Passive –Active
Permanent –Unstable
Plentiful –Sparse
Positive –Negative
Powerful –Weak
Praise –Criticism
Private –Public
Problem –Solution
Professional –Amateur
Profit –Loss
Quality –Inferiority
Random –Specific
Rigid –Flexible
Segregate –Integrate
Shame –Honor
Simple -Complicated
Single –Married
Stiff–Flexible
Strength –Weakness
Sturdy –Weak
Sunny -Cloudy
Superb –Inferior
Temporary –Permanent
Timid –Bold
Toward –Away
Tragic –Comic
Transparent -Opaque
Triumph –Defeat
Union –Separation
Unique –Common
Upset –Relaxed
Urge –Deter
Vacant –Occupied
Vague –Definite
Vertical –Horizontal
Villain –Hero
Visible -Invisible
Wax -Wane
Wealth –Poverty
Synonym Examples
Annihilation, destruction, carnage, ext inction
Benefit, profit, revenue, yield
Cunning, keen, sharp, slick
Destitute, poor, bankrupt, impoverished
Deterioration, pollution, defilement, adulteration
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Fertile, fruitful, abundant, productive
House, dwelling, abode, domicile
Intelligent, clever, brilliant, knowledgeable
Loyal, faithful, ardent, devoted
Organization, institution, management
Partner, associate, colleague, companion
Polite, courteous, cordial, gracious
Risky, dangerous, perilous, treacherous
Sleepy, dro wsy, listless, sluggish
Vacant, empty, deserted, uninhabited .
1.3HOMOPHONES AND HOMONYM S
Homonym Examples
Aid-Aide
Aisle -I’ll-Isle
Aloud -Allowed
Altar -Alter
Ark-Arc
Beech -Beach
Birth -Berth
Bore -Boar
Byte -Bite
Blew -Blue
Bow -Bough
Boy-Buoy
Bread -Bred
Browse -Brows
Cell-Sell
Cereal -Serial
Chilly -Chili
Chord -Cord
Complement -Compliment
Counsel -Council
Creak -Creek
Crews -Cruise
Dual -Duel
Fair-Fare
Fairy -Ferry
Feat -Feet
Fir-Fur
Flea -Flee
Gorilla -Guerril la
Groan -Grown
Hall-Haul
Holey -Holy
Incite -Insight
Jeans -Genes
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Knight -Night
Lessen -Lesson
Links -Lynx
Loan -Lone
Oral -Aural
Ought -Aught
Oar-Or-Ore
Overdo -Overdue
Peak -Peek
Phase -Faze
Pole -Poll
Pray -Prey
Princ ipal-Principle
Raze -Raise
Ring -Wring
Role -Roll
Site-Sight -Cite
Soar -Sore
Sole -Soul
Toe-Tow
Vary -Very
Wait -Weight
We-Wee
Weather -Whether
Which -Witch
Whose -Who’s
In each sentence given below a word or phrase is underl ined.
From the given options choose the word / phrase closest in
meaning to the underlined part.
1. Grouping stars by their constellations is a handy way of mapping
the sky.
a) funny
b) nice
c) convenient
d) simple
2. Centuries ago, a nomadic tribe besie ged the temple to loot its
treasure.
a) wild
b) barbarous
c) brave
d) roving
3. It was a momentous moment in the history of the nation.
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4. This is not an exhaustive list of collocations.
a) complete
b)tiring
c) useful
d) adequate
5. The committee decided to expel the new member.
a) detain
b) remove
c) preserve
d) reserve
6. The teacher berated his students.
a) praised
b) advised
c) reproached
d) supervised
7. When the leadership changed, his position in the organization
became precarious.
a) secure
b) exalted
c) uncertain
d) important
8. There was no doubt that the judgment was fair.
a) upright
b) insincere
c) biased
d) inconsiderate
9. Her silence was taken as tacit agreement.
a) hostile
b) implied
c) overt
d) general
Answers
1. convenient
2. roving
3. important
4. complete
5. remove
6. reproached
7. uncertain
8. upright
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Choose a word that is opposite in meaning to the given keyword.
1. Macabre
a) pleasant
b) gruesome
c) dirty
d) rust ic
e) uncultured
2. Machination
a) evil plot
b) good will
c) enervating
d) appetizing
e) affordable
3. Maelstrom
a) destructive
b) malign
c) benign
d) malicious
e) enchanting
4. malcontent
a) provoked
b) dissatisfied
c) rebellious
d) satisfied
e) tempti ng
5. malediction
a) blessing
b) verbose
c) verbal
d) colloquial
e) curse
6. Malefactor
a) helper
b) criminal
c) benefactor
d) supporter
e) dependent
7. Malodorous
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b) vulgar
c) fragrant
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8. Manifold
a) few
b) open
c) mult iple
d) folded
e) diverse
9. Maudlin
a) weepy
b) pleasing
c) unemotional
d) sentimental
e) vulnerable
10. Maverick
a) conformist
b) rebel
c) individualist
d) eccentric
e) nonconformist
11. Mawkish
a) maudlin
b) sappy
c) weepy
d) mushy
e) unemotional
12. Meander
a) stroll
b) roam
c) ramble
d) rush
e) wander
13. Mendicant
a) beggar
b) honest
c) none of these
d) affluent
e) miserly
14. Mercurial
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b) unpredictable
c) witty
d) lively
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15. Mettle
a) cowardice
b) resolve
c) grit
d) courage
e) valour
Answers
1. pleasant
2. good will
3. benign
4. satisfied
5. blessing
6. benefactor
7. fragrant
8. few
9. unemotional
10. conformist
11. unemotional
12. rush
13. affluent
14. predictable
15. cowardice
Fill in the blanks with the approp riate word. Each question is
followed by four suggested answers. Choose the most appropriate
one.
1.The job of a —————— -is very risky.
a)Minor
b)Miner
c)Miser
d)Miller
2.In e e dt ob u ya ——————— of shoes.
a)Pair
b)Pare
c)Pear
d)Peer
3.She has —————— -looks.
a)Plane
b)Plain
c)Plan
d)None of these
4.We need to purchase ten —————— -of paper.
a)Coirs
b)Choirs
c)Quires
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5.He is determined to —————— –vengeance on his en emies.
a)Reck
b)Wreck
c)Wreak
d)Rack
6.Hundreds of people lost their lives in the —————— –
a)Shipwreck
b)Shipreck
c)Shipwreak
d)Shiprack
7. The measures taken to control the epidemic proved ————
———
a)Efficient
b)Effective
c)Efficacious
d)None of these
8.He is ——————— for the membership of the club.
a)Legible
b)Eligible
c)Illegible
d)None of these
9.His story is not all —————— -
a)Creditable
b)Credible
c)Credulous
d)None of these
10. We expect an ——————— -reply.
a)Expedient
b)Expeditious
c)Expeditiously
d)None of these
11. The eminent man was in —————— danger.
a)Eminent
b)Imminent
c)Immediate
d)Instant
12. He is very ——— ———— –of success.
a)Confident
b)Confidant
c)Confidential
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13. His son performed his funeral ——————
a)Rites
b)Rights
c)Wrights
d)Writes
14. The game quickly turned into a ——————— -
a)Route
b)Root
c)Rout
d)None of these
Answers
1.Miner (A person who works in a mine)
2.Pair (Two similar things used together)
3.Plain (quite ordinary, ugly)
4.Quires (One quire = 24 sheets of paper)
5.Wreak
6.Shipwreck
7.Effective
8.Eligible (qualified)
9.Credible (believable)
10. Expeditious (speedy or prompt)
11. Imminent (about to occur)
12. Confident
13. Rites
14. Rout (defeat)
1.4COLLOCATIONS
The term collocation refers to conventional word
combination s. They are usually easy to understand, but not so easy
for a foreign learner to produce correctly. Some examples of
collocations are given below:
A burning desire (BUT NOT a blazing desire)
Ab l a z i n gr o w( B U TN O Tab u r n i n gr o w )
A heavy smoker (BUT NOT a devoted smoker)
Ad e v o t e dm o t h e r( B U TN O Tah e a v ym o t h e r )
Thanks a lot (BUT NOT Thank you a lot)
Change one’s mind (BUT NOT change one’s thoughts)
A golden opportunity (BUT NOT a golden chance)
Formation of collocations:
Collocations are typically gover ned by conventions. In a
sense they are idiomatic. You can, for example, think of many
adjectives that can be used with the noun ,'smoker 'to say that
somebody smokes a lot. It just happens that English speakers use
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know these correct combinations in order to express the idea
correctly.
A foreign learner who uses wrong combinations may still be
understood, but he or she will not sound natural.
Situational language:
By situational language w e refer to those expressions that
are typically used in everyday situations.
Examples are:
check the oil (But not usually ‘inspect the oil’)
Keep somebody waiting (More natural than ‘make somebody wait)
Is it a direct flight? (More natural than ‘Does the plane go straight
there?’)
List of Common Collocations
Verb collocationshavedomake
have a bath
have a drink
have a good time
have a haircut
have a holiday
have a problem
have a relationship
have a rest
have lunch
have sympathydo business
do nothing
do someone a
favour
do the cooking
do the housework
do the shopping
do the washing up
do your best
do your hair
do your homeworkmake a difference
make a mess
make a mistake
make a noise
make an effort
make furniture
make money
make progress
make room
make troubletakebreakcatch
take a break
take a chance
take a look
take a rest
take a seat
take a taxi
take an exam
take notes
take someone's
place
take someone's
temperaturebreak a habit
break a leg
break a promise
break a record
break a window
break som eone's
heart
break the ice
break the law
break the news to
someone
break the rulescatch a ball
catch a bus
catch a chill
catch a cold
catch a thief
catch fire
catch sight of
catch someone's
attention
catch someone's
eye
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pay a fine
pay attention
pay by credit card
pay cash
pay interest
pay someone a
compliment
pay someone a visit
pay the bill
pay the price
pay your respectssave electricity
save energy
save money
save one's strength
save someone a
seat
save someone's life
save something to a
disk
save space
save time
save yourself the
troublekeep a diary
keep a promise
keep a secret
keep an
appointment
keep calm
keep control
keep in touch
keep quiet
keep someone's
place
keep the changecomegoget
come close
come complete wit h
come direct
come early
come first
come into view
come last
come late
come on time
come prepared
come right back
come second
come to a
compromise
come to a decision
come to an
agreement
come to an end
come to a standstill
come to terms with
come to a tota lo f
come under attackgo abroad
go astray
go bad
go bald
go bankrupt
go blind
go crazy
go dark
go deaf
go fishing
go mad
go missing
go on foot
go online
go out of business
go overseas
go quiet
go sailing
go to war
go yellowget a job
get a shock
get angry
get divorced
get drunk
get frightened
get home
get lost
get married
get nowhere
get permission
get pregnant
get ready
get started
get the impression
get the message
get the sack
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get wet
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Miscellaneous collocationsTimeBusine ss EnglishClassifiers
bang on time
dead on time
early 12th century
free time
from dawn till dusk
great deal of time
late 20th century
make time for
next few days
past few weeks
right on time
run out of time
save time
spare time
spend some time
take your time
tell someone the time
time goes by
time passes
waste timeannual turnover
bear in mind
break off negotiations
cease trading
chair a meeting
close a deal
close a meeting
come to the point
dismiss an offer
draw a conclusion
draw your attention to
launch a new product
lay off staff
go bankrupt
go into partnership
make a loss
make a profit
market forces
sales figures
take on staffa ball of string
a bar of chocolate
ab o t t l eo fw a t e r
a bunch of carrots
a cube of sugar
a pack of cards
ap a do fp a p e r
(taken from www.grammarly.com)
Sample Exercise
1. My grandfather was a …………………. smoker, so few people
were surprised when he died of oral cancer.
a) serial
b) heavy
c) big
2. She was a / an ……………………. wife who loved her husband
more than anything else in the whole universe.
a) devoted
b) sincere
c) intelligent
3. I always avoid his company because he is a crashing
……………………..
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b) nuisance
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4. It is a golden ………………………… If you miss it, you will regret
it.
a) chance
b) opportunity
c) offer
5.She seemed quite interested in buying that house, but at the last
moment, she changed her …………………..
a) mind
b) thoughts
c) offer
6. Although I was …………………. annoyed by her attitude, I said
nothing.
a) moderately
b) lightly
c) slightly
7. Could you ……………… …. the oil?
a) inspect
b) check
c) test
Answers
1. My grandfather was a heavy smoker, so few people were
surprised when he died of oral cancer.
2. She was a devoted wife who loved her husband more than
anything else in the whole universe.
3. I always avoi d his company because he is a crashing bore.
4. It is a golden opportunity. If you miss it, you will regret it.
5. She seemed quite interested in buying that house, but at the last
moment, she changed her mind.
6. Although I was slightly annoyed by her att itude, I said nothing.
7. Could you check the oil?
1.5CHANGING THE CLASS OF WORDS
Intercha ngeof Parts of Speech
Words can be interchanged into another part of speech sometimes
by adding prefixes and suffixes
The following prefixes or suffixes at the b eginning or end or the
word determine whether they are Verbs, Nouns, Adjectives or
Adverbs.
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en- -ment -able
im- -ness -ible
-es -tion -ive
-ed -sion -ful
-ire/ize -ance -al
-fy -cy -ant
-en -ity -ic
-ate -th -ave
-ish -ce -ent
-dom -ant
-ship -ar
-hood -ing
-er/or -y-ly
Some Important words can be changed into all the four forms.
e.g.VerbNounAdjectiveAdverb
devotedevotee,
devotiondevoted,
devotionaldevotedly,
devotionally
contruct construction constructive constructively
harmonised harmony harmonious harmoniously
sensed sensesensitive,
sensiblesensitively,
sensibly
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reflectreflection,
reflectiveness reflective reflectively
astonished astonishment astonishing astonishingly
integrate integration integral integrally
fancied fancy fanciful fancifully
impose imposition imposing imposingly
bonded bond bonded, bonding bonding
stylized style stylish stylishly
expertiseexpertness,
expert expert expertly
symbolise symbolsymbolic,
symbolical symbolically
proportioned proportion proportionate proportionately
marvelled marvel marvellous marvellously
architectured architecture architectural architecturally
manage management manageable manageably
restrict restrictionrestrictive,
restricted restrictively
directed direction direct directly
excite excitement excited excitedly
form formation formative formatively
speeded,
sped speed speedy speedily
exceed excess excessive excessively
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endanger danger dangerous dangerously
notice notice noticeable noticeably
vary variation, variety various variedly
stressed stress stressful stressfully
economies econom yeconomic,
economical economically
relate relation, relativity relative relatively
systematize systemsystematic,
systemic systematically
initiate initiation initiative initiatively
presist presistence presistent presistently
brutalise brutality brutal brutally
include inclusion inclusive inclusively
dirtied dirt dirty dirtily
triumphed triumph triumphant triumphantly
reduce reductionreducible,
reductivereducibly,
reductively
diminish diminution diminishable diminutively
faced face facial facially
functionedfunction,
functioning functioning functionally
tensed tension tensed tensely
sustained sustenance sustainable sustainably
tastedtaste,
tastefulness tasty, tasteful tastefully
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acquiesce acquiescence acquiescent acquiescently
sophisticate sophistication sophisticate sophistically
revere reverence reverential reverentially
obey obedience obedient obediently
regarded regard regardful regardfully
forced force forcible forcibly
depend dependence dependent dependently
secure security secured securely
devote devotion devotional devotionally
suffice sufficiency sufficient sufficiently
authorise authority authoritative authoritatively
define definition definite definitely
compare comparison compara tive comparatively
enrich riches rich, richer richly
inform information infromative informatively
amazed amazement amazing amazingly
pitied pity piteous piteously
delighted delight delightful delightfully
popularize popularity popular popularly
wond ered wonder wonderful worderfully
expect expectation expectant expectantly
needed need, needy needful needfully
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lavished lavishness lavish lavishly
believe belief, believer believable believably
particularizeparticu lar,
particularity particular particularly
sensed sense sensible sensibly
respond response responsive responsively
commune community communal communally
act action, act active actively
brief brevity brief briefly
relate relevance relevant relevantly
completed completion complete completely
practise practice practical practically
mean meaning meaningful meaningfully
express expression expressive expressively
commercialize commerce commercial commercially
conclude conclusion conclusive conclusivel y
necessitate necessity necessary necessarily
spirited spirit spiritual spiritually
focused focus focal focally
create creation, creator creative creatively
visualise vision, visionary visual visually
tortured torture torturous torturously
warmed warmth warm warmly
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famed fame famous famously
specify specificationspecific,
specifiable specifically
sympathise sympathy sympathetic sympathetically
compose composer composed composedly
figured figure figurativ e figuratively
observe observance observable observably
relate relationship relative relatively
fascinate fascination fascinating fascinatingly
engage engagement engaging engagingly
entertain entertainment entertaining entertainingly
clear clarity clear clearly
loved love lovable lovingly
think thought thoughtful thoughtfully
decide decision decisive decisively
appreciate appreciation appreciative appreciatively
feared fear fearful fearfully
(taken from www.grammarly.com)
1.6 SAMPLE EXERCISES
Change the following sentences as directed without changing their
sense:
1.The audience listened to the leader with patience .
(Use Adverb of ‘patience’)
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3.At last he was successful in his venture.
(Use Verb of ‘successful’)
4.She moved towards the stage slowly .
(Use Adjec tive of ‘slowly’)
5.It is impossible for him to revert at this stage.
(Use noun of ‘revert’)
6.The project is progressing satisfactorily .
(Use Adjective of ‘satisfactorily’)
7.She hopes that she will meet him soon.
(Use hopeful for ‘hopes’)
8.It is not allowed to slay animals in the city.
(Use Noun of ‘Slay’)
9.His parents are lucky to have a son who obeys t hem.
(Use adjective of ‘obey’)
10.He has made corrections in all of these sentences.
(Use verb of ‘corrections’)
ANSWERS
1.The audience listened to the leader patiently.
2.The child hasresemblance with his mother.
3.At last he succeeded in his venture.
4.She moved towards the stage with slow pace.
5.Reversion at this stage is impossible for him.
6.The progress of the project is satisfactory.
7.She is hopeful that she will meet him soon.
8.Slaughter of animals is n ot allowed in the city.
9.His parents are lucky to have an obedient son.
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1.6EXERCISES FOR PRACTICE
Choose the correct synonym for the given word.
1.Follow
oA.Group
oB.Lead
oC.Wind
2.Fresh
oA.Loose
oB.Locat e
oC.Stale
3.Cargo
oA.Freight
oB.Transport
oC.Load
4.Fable
oA.Conclusion
oB.Book
oC.Tale
5.Respect
oA.Esteem
oB.Ordinary
oC.Emotion
6.Juvenile
oA.Adult
oB.Court
oC.Restrain
7.Leisure
oA.Esteem
oB.Work
oC.Satire
8.Permit
oA.Conclude
oB.Prohibit
oC.Open
9.Journal
oA.Magazine
oB.Letter
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10.Auspicious
oA.Illegal
oB.End
oC.Promising
11.Striped
oA.Field
oB.Coat
oC.Plain
12.Simple
oA.Quaint
oB.Complex
oC.Destroy
13.Sketch
oA.Drawing
oB.Portrait
oC.Pillar
14.Hollow
oA.Solid
oB.Tunnel
oC.Burrow
15.Doubt
oA.Vision
oB.Certainty
oC.Illustrate
16.Verse
oA.Douse
oB.Prose
oC.Engross
17.Avenue
oA.Road
oB.Green
oC.Park
18.Piece
oA.Escape
oB.Fragment
oC.Peace
19.Infringe
oA.Discuss
oB.Transpire
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20.Tidy
oA. Unkempt
oB.Engulf
oC.Capture
Choose the correct antonym from given options.
1. Discrepancy
a) inconsistency
b) consistency
c) inappropriate
d) variance
e) vagary
2. Disdain
a) attitude
b) honesty
c) admiration
d) zeal
e) disgust
3. Disheveled
a) tidy
b) clumsy
c) unkemp t
d) long
e) exasperated
4. Disingenuous
a) sincere
b) sophisticated
c) trained
d) experienced
e) uncomfortable
5. Dismal
a) remarkable
b) trivial
c) reserved
d) puzzled
e) dislocated
6. Dismay
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b) mitigate
c) soothe
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7. Dispel
a) scatter
b) gather
c) dissipate
d) refract
e) agonize
8. Disposition
a) sparking
b) watchfulness
c) inclination
d) unwillingness
e) temperament
9. Dissipate
a) vanish
b) unite
c) dispel
d) disappear
e) contemplate
10. Disburse
a) collect
b)gather
c) pay out
d) discard
e) distinguish
11. Keen
a) dull
b) sharp
c) brilliant
d) focused
e) unnecessary
12. Keep
a) protect
b) discard
c) convert
d) celebrate
e) avert
13. Kemp
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b) successor
c) brave
d) loser
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14. Kill
a)murder
b) execute
c) animate
d) slay
e) throw
15. Kindle
a) invoke
b) infuriate
c) put off
d) awaken
e) lavish
Read each sentence and fill in the blank with the correct homonym.
1. The healthiest drink is __________ water.
a) plain
b) plane
2. Both co untries signed the __________ treaty.
a) peace
b) piece
3. Maria has just completed her __________ semester of college .
a) forth
b) fourth
4.Thank you for the birthday __________!
a) presence
b) presents
5.Aspirin can __________ some types of pain.
a) lessen
b) lesson
6. Wine and cheese __________ each other.
a) compliment
b) complement
7. The park ranger __________ the lost hikers to safety.
a) lead
b) led
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9.During our tour of the __________, we saw the chamber in which
the legislature meets.
a) capital
b) capitol
10.John likes to purchase many household items from a ______
market.
a) Flea
b) Flee
Read each sentence and fill in the blank with the correct word.
1. I will not be able to ______ ____________ the new job. (accept,
except)
2. Please try not to __________________ your new sunglasses.
(lose, loose)
3. __________________ going to the races this evening. (Their,
They're)
4. How does candy __________________ your blood sugar?
(affect, ef fect)
5. We had __________________ much snow last winter. (to, too,
two)
6. She __________________ the capitals of every state. (new,
knew)
7. __________________ car is parked in the driveway? (Who's,
Whose)
8. April is the __________________ month. (forth ,f o u r t h )
9. The __________________ ingredients of bread are flour, water,
and yeast. (principal, principle)
10. I would __________________ all parents to have a dog.
(advice, advise)
Fill in the blank with the correct collocation.
1He spoke English with a ........ French accent.
a) Heavy
b) pronounced
c) careless
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3) He gave us a ........ account of all your activities at the
conference.
a) tidy
b) detailed
c)big
4) He was able to predict what was going to happen with ........
accuracy.
a) uncanny
b) itemized
c) brief
5) Bad investments made him ____ bankrupt.
a) go
b) become
c) get
6) Teacher told students to _____ a break after long studies.
a) get
b) hav e
c) take
7)After long hours of journey, the falls _____ into view.
a) came
b) get
c)started
8)He always carried a _____ of cards with him on vacations.
a) pad
b) bunch
c) pack
9)She always comes to meeting _____on time
a) exactly
b) right
c) prope rly
10)In difficult situation due to heavy rains, the government asked
people to _____ calm
a) keep
b) stay
c) maintain
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1.He was astonished that she refused hisproposal.
(Use noun of ‘refuse’)
2.He made an agreement with her to complete the job.
(Use verb of ‘agreement’)
3.They were amused to accept our proposal.
(Use noun of ‘amused’)
4.Av i o l e n tm o b appeared atthe scene all of a sudden.
(Use adverb of ‘sudden’)
5.The boy succeeded in the examination by dint of hard work.
(Use adverb of ‘succeeded’)
6.Thecost of thes eo r n a m e n t si sv e r yh i g h .
(Use verb of ‘cost’)
7.The end of this story is very humorous.
(Use noun of ‘humorous’)
8.The host greeted all the guests with affection.
(Use adverb of ‘affection’)
9.The statement issued by the chairman cleared all the doubts.
(Use adverb of ‘cleared’)
10.Splinters of bomb inflicted injuries on her body.
(Use verb of ‘injuries’)
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Unit -2
EDITING
UNIT STRUCTURE
2.1Objectives
2.2Introduction to editing
2.3Editing Principles
2.3.1Accuracy
2.3.2Attribution
2.3.3Balance and Fairness
2.3.4Brevity
2.3.5 Clarity
2.3.6Readability
2.3.7 Human Interest
2.3.8 Sharp Observation
2.4Editing Tools
2.5Steps involved in Editing
2.5.1Organization and Paragraphing
2.5.2 Paragraph Clarity
2.5.3 Overall Coherence
2.5.4Usage and Sentence Structure
2.5.5Spelling and Punctuation
2.6Solved examples
2.7Points to Remember
2.8Check your progress
2.1 OBJECTIVES
To learn the concepts and processes of editing
To learn the Language Skills required for the editing
To know what principles govern the editin g
To learn the various steps involved in editing
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2.2 INTRODUCTION TO EDITING
Editing and proofreading are often neglected, but they are
the crucial final stages of awriting process. Even the smallest error
can result in embarrassing or even costly outcomes (misspelling a
name, transposing digits in telephone number, mistakes in a
prospectus) so taking time and care to check what you have written
is essential.
Accuracy is one of the chief concerns of the ed iting stage.
Editors have the professional and ethical responsibility to include in
their research and writing process the checking of facts, which
includes the correct spelling and pronunciation of names, the
factual details of a story, and any basis upon which conclusions are
drawn. Multiple checks for accuracy are the norm. All careful,
responsible writers should do the same. The reliability of the
finished text depends upon accuracy in there searching and writing
process.
Hence, editing is the first ta sk that should be undertaken
after finishing the first draft of a piece of text. It involves checking
the content of the text to ensure that the ideas are expressed
clearly and logically, forming a coherent and meaningful whole.
Thus, editing is the proce ss of preparing language, images,
or sound for presentation through correction, condensation,
organization, and other modifications. A person, who edits, either
professionally or as a hobby, is called an Editor.
Oxford Dictionary defines editing as,to ‘p repare (written
material) for publication by correcting, condensing, or otherwise
modifying it’’.
Editing requires careful analysis and critical thinking, and
proof reading requires a great deal of attention to detail. As such,
they are not tasks that can be done in a rush or squeezed in
between other tasks: it is essential to devote sufficient time and
concentration to both, and being in the right frame of mind to do this
is very important. Editing is done with specific motives of checking
and improving t he following: Punctuation, Spelling, Sentence
Structure, Subject and Verb Agreement, Proper Word Use, Clarity,
Point of View, Redundancies, Inconsistencies, Dialogue, Flow, and
Format. In simpler terms, editing is done to improve news stories
grammatically , structurally, style -wise, factually, and in terms of
readability. And sub editors or copy editors do the editing.
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flows logically
is coherent and consiste nt
forms a meaningful whole
is clearly expressed
is accurate in the information it provides
has an appropriate tone
is concise
makes its purpose clear
is targeted towards the reader
2.3 EDITING PRINCIPLES
The principles of Good Editing are accuracy, attr ibution,
balance and fairness, brevity, clarity, readability, human interest,
and sharp observation.
2.3.1 Accuracy
The editor should be obsessed with accuracy because one
mistake can destroy the reputation of a newspaper or magazine,
and it takes just f raction of a second to make one. Checking and
crosschecking names, figures, and verifying facts are of utmost
importance. Always attribute the news to the source so that readers
can judge its credibility.
2.3.2 Attribution
Always attribute the matter to itssource so that readers can
judge its credibility. “A highly placed Defence Personnel, Finance
Ministry Sources”, etc. are attributions that help readers to arrive at
their own conclusions, while steering clear of the suspicion that the
reporter is giv ing his own version of the story.
2.3.3 Balance and Fairness
Balance and fairness form the foundation of good editing.
Balance ,is giving both sides of the picture; while fairness is not
taking sides. It also means not providing support to any oneview o r
ideology, institutions, communities or individuals, etc. through the
columns of the paper or the matter. It is the attribute of a
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2.3.4 Brevity
Brevity is a great virtue in journali sm or in any domain
appreciated by readers and editors alike . It is telling a story, as it
should be, without beating around the bush. It saves time and
space and wins applause when consummated to perfection.
2.3.5 Clarity
Clarity is the ability to think clearly and translate it into paper
-a quality that can take one to the higher echelons of writing skill’s
hierarchy.
2.3.6 Readability
Readability has a bearing on sentence length and simple
and forthright manner of expression. The average length of a
sentence should not exceed eighteen words, which is astandard. It
is not easy to r ead a sentence with more than eighteen words.
Beyond 25 words the sentence would be very difficult to read,
though some accomplished authors have far exceeded the
standard and yet remained readable because of their
craftsmanship.
But you are advised to stay out of long -winding and
complicated sentence constructions. The best way is to write news
stories using simple words, short and simple sentences.
2.3.7 Human Interest
Using a style that arouses human interest ,is what the craft
of editing is all about. Editors should see the events from the
readers’ point of view and write the news stories keeping the reader
ever in mind along with his hopes, fears and aspirations. The editor
should identify himself with the proverbial common man who does
not exist but represents the silent majority ,t owhom the journalist or
writer is duty -bound to defend and protect.
2.3.8 Sharp Observation
Sharp observation is the hallmark of an ac e communicator,
particularly in the field of journalism and any domain. It recreates
reality, imparts dynamism to reporting, and heightens the reading
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2.4 EDITING TOOLS
Source: A hand -out by Glencoe/McG raw-Hill.
2.5 STEPS INVOLVED IN EDITING
Use the following strategies to find and correct errors in
organization and paragraphing, usage and sentence structure, and
spelling and punctuation:
2.5.1. Organization and Paragraphing
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Locate the central idea of each paragraph and try to reduce that
idea to a word or phrase. If you cannot decide on one phrase,
list two to three options.
List the paragraph ideas. List these in order under your write up.
Decide whether your paragraphs clearly relate to your write -up.
If not, either rewrite your write -up to incorporate the unrelated
ideas or eliminate the unrelated paragra phs.
2.5.2. Paragraph Clarity
Locate the central idea of each paragraph. Reduce that idea to
aw o r do rp h r a s e .
Look at each paragraph randomly. Consider only the
information in that paragraph.
Ask yourself whether you offer enough details in the paragraph
to support that word or idea.
Decide whether all of your details are relevant.
Ask yourself whether all of the information is related enough to
be in the same paragraph. Should you create another
paragraph or move some of the details to another paragraph?
2.5.3. Overall Coherence
See whether you have clear transitions between paragraphs.
If not, clarify existing transitions, add new ones, and/or rearrange
your paragraphs to make transitions clearer.
2.5.4. Usage and Sentence Structure
a.Subject/Verb Agr eement
Find the main verb in each sentence.
Match the verb to its subject.
Make sure that the subject and verb agree in number.
b.Pronoun Reference/Agreement
Skim your paper, stopping at each pronoun. Look especially
at;it, this, they, their, and them.
Search for the noun that the pronoun replaces. If you can't
find the noun, insert one beforehand or change the pronoun
to a noun. If you can find a noun, be sure it agrees in
number and person with your pronoun.
c.Parallel Structure
Skim your paper, stop ping at key words that signal parallel
structures. Look especially for ,and, or, not only...but also,
either... or, neither...or, both...and.
Make sure that the items connected by these words (e.g.,
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2.5.5. Spelling and Punctuation
a.Spelling
Correct spelling gives your work credibility. Not only will your
reader know that you are educated, but also that you are careful
about your work. You should have a dictionary handy to confirm
that you have correctly spelled all unfamiliar words, especially if
they are key words in the piece. In the workplace, a memo with a
repeatedly misspelled word can be embarrassing. An essay with a
misspelled word in the title, or a word that is spelled incorrectly
throughout the piece, can affect your final grade.
Avoid embarrassing situations like these ,by checking your
spelling. Even if you know all spelling rules by memory ,y o uw i l l
come across exceptions to the rules. Words that come from other
languages ( bourgeoi s, psyche), words have silent letters (alight ,
knack), or words that are technical terms (cryogenics, chimerical)
can present problems. In addition, the spelling can change when
the word is made plural (puppies, octopi).
Homonyms like bear/bare or course / coarse can be easily
confusing; as can thewords that have unusual vowel combinations
(beauty, archaeology). When in doubt, check the words by
consulting a dictionary.
Example: He read thru the entire paper looking for a story on
the protest march. Spel l check suggests replacing “thru” with
“through,” “threw,” or “thorough.” The dictionary will tell you that the
correct spelling is “through.”
Examine each word in the paper individually. Move from the end
of each line back to the beginning. Pointing with a pencil helps
you really see each word. DO NOT RELY ON SPELL CHECK.
Your computer may change a word to a closely spelled word
that is very different in meaning to the word you wrote.
If necessary, check a dictionary.
b.Compound Sentence Commas
Skim for the conjunctions and, but, for, or, nor, so and yet.
See whether there is a complete sentence on each side of the
conjunction. If so, place a comma before the conjunction.
c.Introductory Commas
Skim your paper, looking only at the first two or three wor ds of
each sentence.
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Place a comma at the end of the introductory phrase or clause,
which is befo re the independent clause.
d.Comma Splices
Skim the paper, stopping at every comma.
See whether there is a complete sentence on each side of the
comma. If so, add a coordinating conjunction after the comma
or replace the comma with a semicolon.
e.Fragm ents
Look at each sentence ,to see whether it contains an
independent clause.
Pay special attention to sentences that begin with dependent
marker words, such as 'because ', or phrases such as 'for
example 'or'such as '.
See if the text is only a piece of th e previous sentence that
mistakenly got separated.
f.Run-On Sentences
Review each sentence to see whether it contains more than one
independent clause. Start with the last sentence of your paper,
and work your way back to the beginning, sentence by
sente nce.
Break the sentence into two sentences if necessary.
g.Apostrophes
Skim your paper, stopping only at those words that end in s.
See whether or not each word needs an apostrophe. If an
apostrophe is needed, you will be able to invert the word order
ands a y“ o f ”o r“ o ft h e ” :M a r y ' sh a to rt h eh a to fM a r y .
h.Left-Out Words
Read the paper aloud, pointing to every word as you read. Don't
let your eye move ahead until you spot each word.
Also, make sure that you have not doubled words.
i.Capitalization and Punctuation
Capitalization and punctuation are like auto mechanics for
your writing. They tune up your sentences and make them start,
stop, and run smoothly.
Example : the Russian Ballet travel’s. all over the world, Performing
to amazed Audiences. in each new city;
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Edited Example
The Russian Ballet travels all over the world, performing to
amazed audiences in each new city.
j.Redundancy
Often, writing assignments require a minimum number of
words. Because of this, it is tempting to use several words of
description instead of one well -chosen word with the same
meaning. This redundancy, however, makes sentences awkward
and interrupts the flow to a piece of writing. To write effectively, you
must eliminate words that simply rephrase other words for no
purpose.
Example: The football team made future plans to completely
concentrate on the basic fundamentals of each individual position.
Plans are always for the future; concentrating implies complete
focus; fundamental means basic; and positions are individual.
Therefore, the italicized words are unnecessary modifiers.
Edited Example: The football team made plans to concentrate on
the fundamentals of each position. Some other common
redundancies include whole entire, big fat, complete truth, terrible
tragedy, pitch black, various different, true facts, free gift, and final
outcome.
Words also imply categories, so you can often eliminate a
word t hat names a category.
Example: The dinosaurs that were green coloured were few in
number during that period in history.
Edited Example: There were few green dinosaurs during that
period. Periods, such as the one in the sentence, are always
periods in his tory.
k.Participles and Participial Phrases
A participle is a verb form that can be used as an adjective,
and a participial phrase is a phrase that contains a participle and
any modifiers. For example, when you change the verb “develop” to
“developing” to describe something, you have created a participle.
Adding modifiers to “developing” gives you a participial phrase.
Example: Developing off the coast of Haiti, a tropical storm brought
rain and high winds to the West Indies. (The participial phrase
developing off the coast of Haiti describes the tropical storm.)
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The participial phrase receiving the yellow jersey describes
Lance Armstron g. Participial phrases can transform short, choppy
sentences by adding description and detail.
l.Gerunds and Gerund Phrases
Gerund phrases can also bring variety to your sentences. A
gerund is a verb ending in -ing that serves as a noun.
Example: Runn ing is a good way to stay in shape. Running is
formed from the verb run and is used as a noun in this sentence.
Example: Until I revise many times, I am not happy with my writing.
Writing is formed from the verb write and is used as a noun
in this sent ence. Gerund phrases occur when a gerund is combined
with modifiers.
Example: Working on the shrimp boat was a good summer job.
The phrase working on the shrimp boat serves as a noun in
the sentence.
Example: My brother enjoys skiing at Crystal Mounta in. The
phrase skiing at Crystal Mountain serves as a noun in the
sentence.
m.Appositives and Appositive Phrases
Appositives add description and detail to your writing to
make it clearer. An appositive is a noun or pronoun used to identify
or explain a nother noun.
Example: My cousin Alejandro can play the piano. The noun
Alejandro identifies the noun cousin, so it is an appositive.
Appositives are also combined with modifiers to make
appositive phrases.
n.Infinitives and Infinitive Phrases
Infinitive phrases can also take the monotony out of your
writing. An infinitive is a verb form composed of ‘to plus the verb
base’.
Example: to walk to speak to cry to leave to eat
These verbs are often part of a verb chain, but are not the
main action ver b of the sentence.
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2.6 SOLVED EXAMPLES
1.Unedited passage :
Style is one of the big gaols of a good writer. You create a
piece of Writing that accomplish es all you that you have set out to
accomplish, includes no word that stray from your purpose and is
logically coherent and graceful without excess, then you achieved
style. Notice ,I said, create a piece of writing. That is because
writing good with style rarely just happens it has to be worked at,
crafted, rewritten, revised, and rearranged. Your first drafts are like
the piece of marble that sculptor shave. They look it over and see
how to begin, and then they start carving with large tools like a
hammer or chisels. As the sculpture progresses, the sculptors use
more fine and more fine tools removing smaller and smaller pieces
of marble, until they reach the final stage, when they polish the
sculpture and place it on its base for display.
Marble sculptur esare beautiful to look at, completely
finished, and serve the purpose of portraying a subject —a person
or an object —clear and gracefully. Your writing should go through a
similar process of close revision until the final product is also
beautiful to look at, completely reversed, and serves itspurpose.
Edited passage :
Style is one of the central goals of a good writer. When you
create a piece of writing that accomplishes all you set out to
accomplish, includes no words that stray from your purpose, and i s
logically coherent and graceful without excess, then you have
achieved style. Notice the phrase, “create a piece of writing.” Style
rarely just happens. Instead, your writing has to be worked at,
crafted, rewritten, revised, and rearranged. Your first dr aft is like the
piece of marble that sculptors select. They look it over and visualize
how to begin, and then they start carving with large tools like
hammers or chisels. As the sculpture progresses, the sculptors use
finer and finer tools, removing smalle ra n ds m a l l e rp i e c e so f
marble, until they reach the final stage, when they polish the
sculpture and place it on its base for display.
Marble sculptures are beautiful to look at, are completely
finished, and serve the purpose of portraying a subject —ap e rson
or an object —clearly and beautifully. Your writing should go through
a similar process of close revision until the final product is also
beautiful to look at, completely revised, and serves its purpose.
2.Unedited Passage
With the invention of the personal computer and the Internet,
a new age in communications begins. now people could
communicate fastest and more easily than ever before. Writing,
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longest necessary to write draft after draft when changes could be
made so easily using a word Processor program.
Messages, could now be sent in no time to anywhere in the
world, without addressing envelopes or licking stamps. Century
most early, around the year 1450 a similar revolution in
communications had occurred in Germany. This happened when
Johannes Gutenberg invented the printing press.
Gutenberg was not the first person to use printing to copy a
piece of writing. Printing was already being invented in China,
where they used clay to print oriental characters. Small items, such
as posters and flyers, were already being printed in Europe too,
using the wood block method of printing. Books and other largest
works, however, were still being copied by hand. At this time, books
were usually produced only in Latin, and only the most educated
people read them. Gutenberg’s printing press was about to change
all of this.
Edited Passage
With the invention of the personal computer and the Internet,
a new age in communications began. Now people co uld
communicate faster and more easily than ever before. Writing,
editing, and storing information became quick and easy. It was no
longest necessary to write draft after draft when changes could be
made so easily using a word processor program. Messages, could
now be sent in no time to anywhere in the world, without
addressing envelopes or licking stamps. Centuries most early,
around the year 1450, a similar revolution in communications had
occurred in Germany. This happened when Johannes Gutenberg
invente d the printing press. Gutenberg was not the first person to
use printing to copy a piece of writing. Printing was already being
invented in China, where they used clay to print oriental characters.
Small items, such as posters and flyers, were already bein gp r i n t e d
in Europe too, using the woodblock method of printing. Books and
other largest works, however, were still being copied by hand. At
this time, books were usually produced only in Latin, and only the
most educated people read them. Gutenberg's prin ting press was
about to change all of this.
2.7 POINTS TO REMEMBER
Editing is a special skill to correct the grammatical, syntactic and
semantic errors.
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The process of editing involves the strategies starting from
reading, pointing out the errors to correcting errors and following
the strict guidelines.
The set of tools are designed for editing the given passage.
Editing is done in correcting, grammatical errors, punctuation
errors, syntax errors and maintaining the cohesion and
coherence of the matter.
2.8 CHECK YOUR PROGRESS
1.Proofread and revise the following sentence fragments. Make
them complete sentences by adding the missing subject or
predicate. Write the revised sentences on the lines provided.
Note: There may be many ways to revise the sentences depending
on the words you choose to add. Some need both a subject and a
predicate. Try to make them the best sentences you can, and don’t
forget to add the appropriate end punctuation. Answers can be
found at the end of the lesson.
1.Ran for student body president
2.Was wearing my shin guards
3.Luis to Puerto Rico rather frequently
4.Chose the new soccer team captains, Michael and Jose
5.Played the electric gu itar in her new band
6.Sent me an e -mail with a virus
7.The cat while she ate
8.After the accident happened in front of the school
9.Put too much syrup on his pancakes
10.Rarely gets up before noon on Saturdays
2.The following passage has not been edited. There is an error in
each line. Write the incorrect word and the correct word in the
answer sheet against the correct blank number.
“Either you or your friend Shalu have stolen my note
(a) ...………. ..…..……
book”, shouted Shreya. Neither I nor my friend were
(b)…………….. …………
your culprit, said Shalu. We both are not in the class since
(c)…………….. …………
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But who are the culprit then? Asked Shreya.
(e)…………….. …………
Id o n ’ tk now that but we both were not guilty.
(f)…………….. …………
3.Read the passage below. Correct the errors pointed by
numbers:
My 1) brother in law is an actuary for an insurance company. He
works with statistics every day. He is extremely organized. He
takes the same items to work every 2) morning a lunch bag, a
thermos 3) with coffee, and his briefcase. His lunch bag always
contains the same things: 4) an apple raspberry yogurt and a tuna
salad sandwich. He always 5) carry’s the same items in his
briefcase: his insurance documents, an extra tie, and an extra pair
of socks. He takes the same route to work every day: down First
Avenue to the Interstate, Exit 246 to Dodge Rd., and right on
Dodge Rd. to the insurance company.6) At work, he follows the
same routine every day. After work, he always forgets 7) where he
park his car. 8) I guess it helps to be very organized when you are
so forgetful!
4.“To be, or not to be…that is the 1) question” This 2) well -known
utterance has been the source of both myster ya n dw o n d e r m e n tf o r
students around the world since the turn of the 16th century —
arguably the zenith of Shakespeare’s creative output. However, the
mere ubiquity of this phrase fails to answer some basic questions
about 3) it’s rather context. Where did i tc o m e4 )f r o mw h a td o e si t
mean? The 5) first of these questions (where does it come from?)
can be answered fairly easily: from Shakespeare’s famous play
Hamlet. 6) As for the last of the two questions, a complete answer
would require a more 7) deep 8) lo ok at Shakespearean culture and
nuance.
5.Almost two 1) thousands of years after being 2) baried by falling
ash from a two -day volcanic eruption, Pompeii reveals fascinating
details about 3) day to day life in the Roman Empire. 4) Pompeii’s
population ro ughly 20,000 inhabitants practiced several religions.
This is evidenced by temples dedicated to the Egyptian goddess
Isis, as well as the 5) presence of Jews and worshipers of Cybele
(called the “Great Mother” by her followers). Pompeii’s citizens
practice d all of these religions in apparent peaceful coexistence
with followers of the state religion, 6) but worshipped Jupiter and
the Roman 7) emperor they led astonishingly long lives, assisted by
doctors and dentists, and 8) were very well educated.
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45Unit -3
SUMMARIZATION
Unit Structure :
3.1 Objective s
3.2 Introduction
3.3 What Is Summary Writing?
3.4 Why Summarise?
3.5 Characteristics Of A Good Summary
3.6 Steps toF o l l o wB e f o r eW r i t i n g aSummary
3.7 Steps toF o l l o wW h i l eW r i t i n gAS u m m a r y
3.8 Examples
3.9 Exercises
3.10 Let us sum up
3.1OBJECTIVE S
The Objective of this Chapter is to help learners unders tand
the importance of summary w riting ,as it is an integral part of the
'Reading Comprehension Skills 'and understanding the aptitude of
scanning and s kimming. By finding the key points and the main
idea words, students gradually can become more skilful readers .
Emphatically writing it concise lywith precise vocabulary enhances
one’s writing skills.
3.2INTRODUCTION
This chapter introduc es the students to the concept of
Summary writing and how and why it is important in today’s English
Language analysing and understanding. A summary writing
definitely will help students comprehend and correspond better
which is indeed an integral part of one’s communicative skill and
personality development.
3.3 WHAT IS SUMMARY WRITING?
Summary is the compressed version of a larger reading.
Usually it is the short description of a story or a piece of writing
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46express the main idea and the relevant details in one’s own words.
The objective of writing a summary is, thus, to express in short and
in one’s own words what the writer wants to correspond in the piece
of writing.
Writing a good summary definitely demonstrates that one
has very thoroughly understood the text and is capable of
communicating that understanding to the readers. Initially summary
writing might seem to be a c omplicated form of art because it’s
often tempting to include most of the information or not toinclude
anything at all. But it is this balancing of the important and the
unimportant context that supports in creating a perfect summary.
Knowing which points to include is undoubtedly important, but
knowing what to leave out may be even more helpful.
3.4 WHY SUMMARISE?
Writing a summary is definitely an important skill that
students can use throughout their academic career and even later.
In addition, summar izing undoubtedly improves reading skills as
students pick out the main ideas of a text through proper reading
and analysing. It also helps with vocabulary skills as students
paraphrase the reading material, altering the vocabulary and
grammar as they do s o.
In addition, critical thinking skills are improved as students
decide on the central ideas of the text that should be included in the
summary. Finally, writing and editing skills are enhanced as
students draft and edit the summary. And if students wor kw i t h
peers throughout the writing and revision process, it helps with
cooperative learning.
3.5 CHARACTERISTICS OF A GOOD SUMMARY
Can be understood without the reference to the original
Is an accurate replica of, or contains only the ideas or
informati on of, the original
Is concise without any unnecessary detail
Is a clear ,cohesive and complete piece of writing
3.6 STEPS TO FOLLOW BEFORE WRITING A
SUMMARY
1.Skim the Text –First try to understand the piece of the text and
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472.Read the piece thoroughly –To understand the specifics of
the piece the content should be thoroughly read again. Notes
should be taken down and key passages should be highlighted.
Even one should divide the parts and sections and the author’s
main idea should be taken into consideration.
3.Outline the Text –the support points should be noted down
using one’s own words.
4.Read, Mark and Annotate the original –Highlight the Topic
sentence, highlight the key points/key words/phrases, highlight
the concluding sentence, and outline each paragraph in the
margin.
3.7 STEPS TO FOLLOW WHILE WRITING A
SUMMARY
1.Clearly identify the work –There should be a clear
identification of th e work which will automatically let the readers
know that one is summarizing a piece of another writer’s work.
The source (author –first/last name, title, date of publication,
volume number, place of publication, publisher, URL , etc.)
should be clearly me ntion ed.
2.Summarize the piece as one whole –Omit nothing important
and one should strive for overall consistency through suitable
transitions. While s ummarizing language like ‘the article claims’
or ‘the author suggests’ can be used. The ideas should be
presented in a neutral fashion without including one’s opinions
or ideas or interpretations. And should be concise as far as
possible.
3.The lay out –The main idea of the original should be
paraphrased. The major supporting points should be in outline
form. The major supporting explanations (example –reasons,
causes or effects) should be properly connected.
4.The writing tips –
Should be w ritten in the present tense.
Should be en sure dthat the author and title of the work are
included.
Should be concise: defi nitely a summary should not be equal
in length to the original text.
If the words of the author are used then that should be cited.
Own opinions, ideas, or interpretations should not be put into
the summary. The purpose of writing a summary is to
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485.Conclude with a final statement –It should not be one’s own
point of view, however it should reflect the significance of the
article from the author’s standpoint.
6.Check for accuracy –Check for accuracy without jumping to
any immediate conclusion. It should be checked that nothing is
omitted and no personal interpretation is in any way expressed.
7.Revise the work –Now that the work has been monitored for
accuracy and efficiency of ton e and writing, one should finally
check the spelling, grammar and punctuation errors.
3.8 EXAMPLES
I.Summarize the following article about the reasons for
child abuse in not more than 120 words.
The childhood years are supposed to be the best times of
one's life; playing and having fun. Yet there are many children who
are deprived of this childhood. They are tortured and verbally and
physically abused.
There is no reason or excuse for child abuse. Abusers claim
they do it because of the stress of work. Ch ild-abusing housewives
way they feel harassed by a crying child and are unable to curb
their own fury, especially if no support is received from anyone.
This is not surprising since support is extended to a victim of child
abuse more readily than to the pe rpetrator. Occasionally, parents
may vent their frustrations on their child if they fight and quarrel with
each other. In cases like there, it is the children who are the victims.
In this modern age where both parents are usually holding jobs,
children are left with babysitters and nurseries. Abuse by these
carers may occur when there are too many children to be minded.
The disappearance of the extended family system is partly to be
blamed for these incidents.
Crowded homes and financial problems can also lead to
child abuse. When there are too many mouths to feed, parents feel
the pressure and vent their anger on a child. Substance abuse is
another factor which increases the incidents of child abuse. Under
the influence of alcohol or drugs, a parent many n ot know what he
or she may be doing. Or, rather, knows what he or she is doing but
is not bothered at all. A drug addict many experience mood swings
and is easily provoked by a crying baby. Thus we see and read
horrifying reports of a child being savagely tortured and dumped
elsewhere, like garbage.
Psychologists believe that child abusers may have been
victims of abuse themselves. Thus, in anger and hatred, they
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49children should be beaten in order to maintain control. These are
troubled people who need help.
A home is supposed to be a haven where a child ought to
feel safe and secure. Unfortunately, more often than not, the home
is al so where a child is abused. Whatever the reasons for the
abuse, something must be done to stop the cruelty and help these
parents who simply cannot cope with parenting. Parents -to-be
should be counselled and inculcated with parenting skills. The Child
Protection Act which was passed in Parliament in 1991 does not
effectively prevent child abuse. Stricter enforcement is necessary.
Thus, it requires a commitment from each individual to help families
with victims. And troubled parents are the perpetrators.
Answer
Child abuse can occur when parents are unable to cope with
stress from work and family commitments. It may also occur when
children are left with child -minders who may be too busy with other
kids. Parents who have financial problems may take it out on the
children. Substance abuse may also result in child abuse where the
addicts many not know what they are doing till it is too late. Another
reason could be due to these child abusers being victims of child
abuse themselves. They treat their children the way they were
treated and it becomes a vicious cycle. Positive steps should be
taken to support and help parents or guardians to cope with
parenting. (116 words)
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II. Summarize the following article about bact eria in not
more than 120 words.
Bacteria are the smallest living things with a cellular
structure; each individual bacterium consisting of one single
colorless cell, which is usually either spherical or rod -shaped.
Individual bacteria measure from 0.0001 inches to 0.00001 inches
in length, so they can be seen only with the help of a high -power
microscope. They are so small that they can float in the
atmosphere, usually as 'passengers' on dust particles, up to a
height of several thousand feet, except immed iately after a heavy
downpour, when the air is washed clean.
Bacteria are present in all natural as well as in drinking water
that has not been purified or bailed. A large number of bacteria live
in the soil, down to a depth of several feet, and they are particularly
abundant in faeces and sewage. Thus, living bacteria are always
present on the surface of our bodies and on everything around us,
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50Since most kinds of bacteria contain no chlorophyll, they
cannot use light energy and Synthesize their food. They have to get
their food in other ways, mostly ready -made by other living things.
Like plants, it can only take in dissolved food. A majority get their
supply from dead remains of other organisms.
Bacteria reproduce by dividing into two, and these new
individuals grow so quickly that they are ready to divide again in
about half an hour. Hence, in ten hours, under the most favorable
conditions, a single bacterium can produce over a million bacteria.
That is one reason for it being so difficult to ensure any object is
completely free from any kind of living organisms. In addition, some
forms of bacteria have a waxy envelope outside their cell wall and
are thus more difficult to kill.
Few bacteria can long survive a temperature above 80°C in
the presence of moisture. Hence, when food items are boiled,
nearly all the bacteria present are killed. Pasteurization is a milder
heat treatment that destroys the bacteria in milk. The rate of
multiplication of bacteria is greatly slowed down at temperatures
below 10°C. This means that food will remain unaffected by
bacteria in a refrigerator. Drying is also another method of
preserving food and this dehydration of foodstuff prevents bacteria
from growing and multiplying as there is insufficient moisture.
Answer
Bacteria are tiny colorless cell sthat cannot be seen with the
naked eye. They are found everywhere in the atmosphere, in our
water as well as in the soil. However, they are seldom found i nside
the tissues of plants and animals. They are unable to produce their
own food and so they rely on other living things. Their reproduction
process is through division of cells and this happens very quickly,
making it difficult to kill them. However, mo st bacteria are unable to
survive a thigh temperature in water. The irreproduction process is
also slowed down when it is extremely cold. Dehydration of
foodstuffs will also stop the multiplication process as there is
insufficient moisture for the bacteria to grow. ( 119 words )
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3.9 EXERCISES
I.Summarize in not more than 120 words, describing the life
in deserts.
As what geographers have estimated, about twenty percent
of the earth's surface is occupied by des erts. A majority of us view
deserts as one unique kind of landscape --areas with little or no
rainfalls. In actual fact, there are differences between the deserts,
though in varying degrees. While it is common for laymen like us to
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51some where large sand dunes inhabit. Despite the fact that rainfall
is minimal, temperatures do change in deserts, ranging from
seasonal ones to daily changes where extreme hotness and
coldness are experienced in t he day and night.
Unfavourable conditions in the deserts, especially the lack of
water, have discouraged many living things from inhabiting these
landscapes. Nevertheless, there are exceptionally surviving ones
which through their superb tactics, have man aged to live through
and are still going strong. One such kind is the specialist annual
plants which overcome seasonal temperature changes with their
extremely short, active life cycles. In events of sudden rain, the
plant seeds pullulate and grow very qui ckly to make full use of the
rain water. Their flowers bloom and set seeds that ripen quickly in
the hot sun too. Once the water runs dry, the mother plant dies,
leaving behind the drought -resistant seeds, waiting patiently for the
next rainy season to arr ive.
The Cacti, a native in American deserts, adapts to the dry
surroundings by having unique body structures. The plant has
swollen stems to help store water that carries it through months. By
having sharp pines instead of leaves, water loss through resp iration
is minimized. Besides, these pointed pines also help the plant ward
off grazing animals, thus enhancing its survival period.
Besides plants, there are also animals with distinct surviving
tactics in deserts too. For instance, Skinks (desert lizard s)
metabolize stored fats in their bulbous tails, producing water to
supplement their needs, just like what camels do with the stored
food in their humps during long journeys through deserts.
Antelopes like the addax, have very low water needs and hence ar e
able to tolerate the conditions in deserts, extracting moisture from
the food they eat.
Finally, there are the sandgrouses (desert birds) which do
not have special features to overcome the drought -like nature in
deserts. Hence, to survive in these hot, dry deserts, they need to
spend a large part of their time flying in search of
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II. Summarize in not more than 120 words, the advantages
and disadvantages of advertisements.
We are bombarded by many a dvertisements every day.
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52Advertisements are actua lly very useful though we
sometimes feel annoyed when they interrupt our favourite television
programs. They provide us with free information on the products
and services. There are two types of advertisements. The
informative advertisements are the ones w hich provide us with the
details of the products or services. This information is especially
useful if the product or service is new. For instance, when we need
to buy a computer, advertisements describing the latest models and
their different functions wo uld be extremely helpful. However, only a
minority of the advertisements are informative ones. Many of them
belong to the second category --the persuasive kind. These
advertisements not only tell us more about the products, at the
same time, they persuade customers to buy them by claiming that
their products are superior to the rivalry ones. These claims may
sometimes be untrue.
Besides being informative and persuasive, advertisements
also help to subsidize the prices of magazines and newspapers.
Our news papers are sold at a low price of about one dollar, owing
to the advertisements in the papers; otherwise, the price would
have been higher.
While advertisements can be good helpers for shopping,
they do have their shortcomings. Most advertisements aim to sell
only. Faults of the products or services are usually hidden from the
consumers. Hence, sometimes, we feel deceived if the product or
service we bought does not turn out the way the advertisements
claim to be.
Sometimes, advertisements by rival compet itors can get very
intensive, especially when there are many firms producing similar
products. One common example is the washing powder. There are
so many advertisements for the different brands that customers
sometimes get confused over what they should b uy. Furthermore,
having more advertisements would mean that the production cost
of the firm would be increased. These rises in cost are usually
passed on to the consumers in the form of higher prices.
Hence, in conclusion, though I do advocate advertiseme nts,
I do not deny their flaws. Without them, we might have to buy things
based on incomplete information or go through more complicated
ways before getting to know the products or services. On the other
hand, too many advertisements also complicate our bu ying
decisions. So I would say that we cannot live without
advertisements but we must be careful how we live with them.
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533.10 LET’S SUM UP
A summary is a shortened passage, which retains the essential
inform ation of the original. It is a fairly brief restatement –in
one’s own words –of the contents of a passage.
Note: One simply has to report back what the writer has said,
without making any kind of significant opinions or judgments.
It’s a skill worth the time and effort as students will use it
throughout their academic careers and even later .Italso
provides benefit in reading, writing and critical thinking skills.
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EMAIL WRITING
UNIT STRUCTURE
4.0 Objectives
4.1 Introduction to Email Writing
4.2 General Principals of Email Writing
4.3 Steps for Email Writing
4.4 Sample emails
4.4.1Email writing for Inquiry
4.4.2Email writing for Invitation
4.4.3Email writing for Thank you
4.4.4Email writing for Request for permission
4.4.5Email writing for Sponsorship
4.5 Points to Remember
4.6 Check Your Progress
4.0 OBJECTIVES
The chapter will introduce learners to the overall history and
evolution of email ,in brief. It will also give general guidelines
regarding the writing of a good email. The o bjective of this Chapter
is to help learners understand the importance of formal email
writing, as it is an integral part of the work culture. There is a vas t
difference into informal and formal communication via email. The
After studying this chapter, learners will understand the key points
of writing a good formal email.
4.1 INTRODUCTION TO EMAIL WRITING
The email writing is web feature helping the scores of people
to share the messages instantly. It is difficult to imagine a life
without email in the ultra -modern society. It has become one of the
standard means of communication in formal as well as social
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55In the earliest period of the history of emails, the term was
used to describe fax document transmission. According to
Wikipedia, the term email was coined since around 1993. E -mail is
part of the standard TCP/IP set of protocols. Sending messages is
typically done by SMTP (Simple Mail Transfer Protocol) and
receiving messages is handled by POP3 (Post Office Protocol 3),
or IMAP (Internet Message Acces sP r o t o c o l ) .I M A Pi st h en e w e r
protocol, allowing you to view and sort messages on the mail
server, without downloading them to your hard drive.
Though there is some degree of uncertainty as to when
email was invented, the father of the modern version is generally
regarded to be American Ray Tomlinson. Before Tomlinson,
messages could be sent between users, but only when they were
connected to the same computer. Even once computers were
networked, messages could not be targeted to a particular
individual. Tomlinson devised a way to address email to certain
users, and thus was credited for one of the most important
communication inventions in the 20th century. The publicity of the
commercial use of email is attributed to the Indian entrepreneur Mr.
Sabeer B hatia who co -founded Jaxtr, Inc. in 2005 and Windows
Live Hotmail (also known as Hotmail Corporation) in 1996.
Users receive and send email using simple message
transfer protocol (STMP). Other protocols, including Post Office
Protocol (POP) and Internet M essage Access Protocol (IMAP),
allow users to retrieve and store messages. Although there are
other protocols for message retrieval and storage, SMTP is the
standard protocol for sending and receiving messages via Internet
Protocol (IP).
In the beginning, email usage required having a program
dedicated to the application, or at least having an email service
provider with a system set up to handle it. The software for the
application is called email client software. There are many different
email applicatio ns available, some of which cost money to use
while others are free.
In addition to accessing electronic mail through email client
software, Webmail has also become very popular. Most email
service providers offer this as an additional benefit, where the user
can access their mailbox over the Internet. Some email services
are specifically designed using the World Wide Web as its primary
interface. These sites have become very popular, as they usually
offer individuals a chance to open an email account at no charge.
Internal emails, just like other emails, should not be too
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56they were originally intended! Always use your spell checker, and
avoid slang.
4.2 GENERAL PRINCIPALS OF EMAIL WRITING
In the earlier section we have understood that Email is a
computer -based communication system where messages can be
written by a sender on a computer. These messages are then
transmitted v ia computers to the addressee’s mail server where
they can be opened and read by the receiver. Originally these
messages could contain only text, but nowadays anything that is
storable on a computer can be transmitted via email messages.
There are email sy stems that can handle information such as
pictures, sound, and video without assistance from other
applications. Email is distinguished from communication services
such as chat or talk by its asynchronous character. Asynchronous
refers to the possibilitie s for the sender and the receiver of a
message to send and read the message at different times.
Therefore, every email writer needs to follow general
principles of email writing which involves the basic etiquettes. The
following points will give you an i dea what care you need to take
while drafting the emails:
4.2.1Special Attention to the Subject Line
In order to give your mail a smart heading you are required
to set your purpose and decide the subject matter in a concrete
manner as it involves prompt attention. The professionals do have
natural habit of scanning the details of sender as well as the subject
line. So build up a reputation for sending good, interesting, brief,
and useful mail.
It is worth to remember that the subject line is like the
caption of a news item or advertisement. Whether or not a reader
judges a news items to be worth reading is often determined by the
way the caption is given the intriguing, interesting, or shocking ones
attract the reader most.
Thus, the subject line should be brief, clear, specific, land
well formed. They should tell the receiver clearly what the mail is
about. A caution to avoid the most common defect found in subject
lines is they are too broad and so too vague.
4.2.2The Length of email
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the receiver easier and stimulates him to give you the immediate
feedback. The longer the text, the more difficult is to read the text
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57scrol ling you need in order to read it and the less comfortable it
becomes. The practical problem of emails is, these days, the
professionals receives dozens of emails every day.
4.2.3Courtesy
The business or social emails are no way different from the
letter writing. It is advised that you should never forget to include
the courteous words and use the language that suits the educated
individual. In addition to your grammar, style and punctuations, use
you attitude. Courtesy is like lubricant oil which removes friction; it
makes relations as well as professions smoother and helps to
maintain friends and professional relations. Courtesy softens the
sting of an unpleasant piece of information, creates goodwill, and
produces a favourable response. It is not advisa ble to write
discourteous letters as it often proves very costly. One may lose
both friends and business. It always pays to be courteous in
business. Goodwill is the greatest asset for an organization and
courtesy in correspondence is one of the most natur al and
economical means of building it.
Some of the phrases italicized in the following sentences
have been found useful in tiding over a difficult situation and
making correspondence pleasant:
The examples of the following statements will broaden your
vision of writing emails:
Thanks for your email of 12 October, 2017.
Thank you very much for your email of 13 December, 2017.
We are glad to note that you are now in a position to pay our
bill. We appreciate your writing to us so promptly.
We regret to inf orm you that we cannot meet your order
immediately.
We are sorry that you did not receive the books in time.
You will be pleased to know that we have dispatched the books
you ordered in your email of 16 July, 2017.
4.2.4Conciseness
Transmission of maxim um information by using minimum
words should be your aim in email -writing. If you clearly and
concisely write what you wish to say, you will be able to arrest the
attention of the reader and focus it on the message. Avoid
unnecessary details and roundabout expressions and come to the
point directly. Remember that people are busy and they receive
dozens of emails daily. It will be irritating for them to go through
long introductions and preliminaries. Do not forget that an email is a
means of contact between two persons. When you meet a person
after greeting him you straight -away come to the point. Adopt the
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584.2.5Attach Essential files and pictures
One of the beauties of e -mail is that virtu ally any file can be
attached to e -mail and transmitted. Such files retain any formatting
done in it. This makes it easy to distribute copies of documents,
artwork, presentation slides, and so forth to a large number of
people quickly and reliable. However , attaching files has dark side,
too. Don’t attach to your mail large text and graphics files without
checking in advance with the intended receiver.
4.2.6Mind Your Language
At the time of writing an email, the sender should ensure that
his knowledge of the receiver is comprehensive. The level of
knowledge, educational background and status of the decoder help
the encoder in formulating his message. In case there is any
discrepancy between the usage and comprehension of terms,
miscommunication can arise. If the sender decides to back up his
communication with facts and figures, there should be accuracy in
stating the same. A situation in which a receiver is forced to check
the presented facts and figures should not arise. Besides, bad
Grammar and Spelling errors can be fatal as countless mails that
flash across the globe are unclear and inconsiderate to their
readers. They generate even more mails seeking clarification or
explaining mails because e -mail is conversational. The medium is
so quick and so immed iate that the sender and the recipient feel as
though they are speaking to each other long distance.
If your e -mail contains multiple messages that are only
loosely related, in order to avoid the risk that your reader will reply
only to the first item th at grabs his or her fancy, you could number
your points to ensure they are all read (adding an introductory line
that states how many parts there are to the message). If the points
are substantial enough, split them up into separate messages so
your recipi ent can delete, respond, file, or forward each item
individually.
Keep your message readable.
Use standard capitalization and spelling, especially when your
message asks your recipient to do work for you.
Skip lines between paragraphs.
Avoid fancy type faces. Don't depend upon bold font or large
size to add nuances. Many people's e -mail readers only display
plain text. In a pinch, use asterisks to show *emphasis*.
Use standard capitalization.
4.2.7Identify yourself clearly
When contacting someone cold , always include your name,
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59If you are following up on a face -to-face contact, you might
appear too timid if you assume your recipient doesn't remember
you; but yo u can drop casual hints to jog their memory: "I enjoyed
talking with you about PDAs in the elevator the other day."
Every fall, I get e -mails from "bad_boy2315@yahoo.com" or
"FuZzYkItTy2000@hotmail.com" who ask a question about "class"
and don't sign the ir real names. While formal phrases such as
"Dear Professor Sneedle wood" and "Sincerely Yours," are
unnecessary in e -mail, when contacting someone outside your own
organization, you should write a signature line that includes your full
name and at least a link to a blog or online profile page (something
that does not require your recipient to log in first).
4.2.8Distinguish between formal and informal situations
When you are writing to a friend or a close colleague, it is
OK to use "smilies": -),a b b r e v i ations (IIRC for "if I recall correctly",
LOL for "laughing out loud," etc.) and nonstandard punctuation and
spelling (like that found in instant messaging or chat rooms). These
linguistic shortcuts are generally signs of friendly intimacy, like
sharing co ld pizza with a family friend. If you tried to share that
same cold pizza with a first date,
4.3 STEPS FOR EMAIL WRITING
Writing a formal email can seem like a daunting task, since
email is so often used for personal and informal purposes. If you
need to write an email to a teacher, boss, business contact,
government agency, or other recipient that requires formality, just
follow a few simple guidelines given below:
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604.3.1. Decide the Purpose
People have different opinions about the form and content o f
e-mails, so it is always helpful to be aware of the expectations of
your audience. For example, some people regard e -mail as a rapid
and informal form of communication —a way to say “hello” or to ask
a quick question. However, others view e -mail as simply am o r e
convenient way to transmit a formal letter. Such people may
consider an informal e -mail rude or unprofessional. Therefore,
decide who your audience is and what your purpose of writing
email is. This is essential to ensure that your message has its
intended effect.
4.3.2 Recipient's Email
The recipients address should be written exactly without a single
letter error as it will lead to the domain failure. Even the initial letter
either capital or small letter. If the recipient is your regular
addre ssee, there is possibility of stored information which you can
scroll and select the exact one without making any confusion of
similar names list. Therefore, maintain the contact list and store it.
4.3.3 Cc: and Bcc: (‘carbon copy’ and ‘blind carbon copy ’)
Copying individuals on an e -mail is a good way to send your
message to the main recipient while also sending someone else a
copy at the same time. This can be useful if you want to convey the
same exact message to more than one person. In professional
settings, copying someone else on an e -mail can help get things
done, especially if the person receiving the copy is in a supervisory
role. For example, copying your boss on an e -mail to a non -
responsive co -worker might prompt the co -worker to respond. Be
aware, however, that when you send a message to more than one
address using the Cc: field, both the original recipient and all the
recipients of the carbon copies can see all the e -mail addresses in
the To: and Cc: fields. Each person who receives the messa ge will
be able to see the addresses of everyone else who received it.
Blind copying e -mails to a group of people can be useful
when you don’t want everyone on the list to have each other’s e -
mail addresses. The only recipient address that will be visible to all
recipients is the one in the To: field. If you don’t want any of the
recipients to see the e -mail addresses in the list, you can put your
own address in the To: field and use Bcc: exclusively to address
your message to others. However, do not assum et h a tb l i n d
copying will always keep a recipient from knowing who else was
copied —someone who is blind copied may hit “reply all” and send a
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614.3.4 Subject Line
E-mail subjec t lines are like newspaper headlines. They
should convey the main point of your e -mail or the idea that you
want the reader to take away from your e -mail. Therefore, be as
specific as possible. Please refer the earlier section of principles to
know the sig nificance of the subject line.
Examples:
Thank you for your review!
Thanks for attending the Special Seminar
We appreciate your support!
Special thanks from our CEO
Tejas, thank you for your donation!
Great to see you yesterday!
Thanks for coming out! (Pl us photos from the event)
Following up from the Small Business Expo
As Promised: Charity Sponsorship Information
4.3.5 Salutation
Place the salutation in the beginning of the body of the
email. The salutation begins with the word Dear, continues with the
recipient's title and last name, and ends with a colon. If you are
unsure of the recipient's gender and the recipient does not have a
professional title, omit the title and, instead, use both the first and
the last names in the salutation (Dear Anand Piram al). If you do not
know the name of the recipient of the email, refer to the department
you are writing to (Dear Technical Support :). Avoid salutations
such as Dear Sir or Madam.
4.3.6 Body
Start the email after the salutation. Body paragraphs will be
automatically spaced with a
Be concise, direct, and considerate. State the email's
purpose in the opening paragraph. Include supporting information
in a middle paragraph or two, and conclude your email with a brief
paragraph that both establishes goodwill and expresses what
needs to be done next.
4.3.7 Closing Phrase
Before you end your email, it’s polite to thank your reader
one more time and add some polite closing remarks. You might
start with “Thank you for your patience and cooperation” or “Thank
youfor your consideration” and then follow up with, “If you have any
questions or concerns, don’t hesitate to let me know” and “I look
forward to hearing from you”.
4.3.8 End with a closing
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62professional. Avoid closings such as “Best wishes” or “Cheers”
unless you are good friends with the reader. Write a complimentary
closing phrase two spaces below the final body paragraph. With
Warm regar ds, Yours truly, Sincerely, or Sincerely yours are
common endings for professional emails. Capitalize the first letter
of the first word of your complimentary closing, and end the
complimentary closing with a comma. Finally, before you hit the
send button, review and spell check your email one more time to
make sure it’s truly perfect!
4.4 SAMPLE EMAILS
4.4.1Email writing for Inquiry
Enquiry is a common incident in almost every place such as
school, colleges, offices etc. If you have any doubt regarding any
matter in your work place, you can seek enquiry by the head of the
office or department or institution. For this you have to formally
write an email for enquiry. In enquiry emails, the enquiry subject
should be briefly written. Relevant information sho uld be supplied to
the receiver of the enquiry mail so that he can easily go forward to
make an enquiry. And one should write that he/she is there to help
him/her in the enquiry.
The enquiry email should be closed professionally, i.e., there
should be gre eting and a signature.
Sample Enquiry Email
To:principal.abc@samna.edu
Sub: Request for an enquiry about admission at college
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have the honor to state the following for your information and
necessary action as the matter deems fit.
I have successfully completed my HSC from a reputed college at
Mumbai. I went to take admission at your college. But my
application for admission had been rejected and admissions are
given to a student with lowe r marks.
I want an enquiry about this matter. Hope you will take necessary
action regarding this matter.
Sincerely yours
4.4.2Email writing for Invitation
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63either social or professional in character. An invitation email is just
like any invitation letter except that it is delivered to the invitee via
email.
Email invitation has become a common and preferred mode
of formal writ ten communication. They prefer emails because of the
timely delivery and the fact that even the printed invitation letter can
be scanned and forwarded via email.
To:jaybhai@gmail.com
Subject: Invitation for Diwali Celebrations!
Dear Jaybhai,
This Diwali, as we celebrate the return of our Lord and Savior
Rama from 14 years of exile, we will love to bring His love and
hope to people around us by sharing the love of God with them.
This means that there will be a serv ice at Temple at 11am on
Diwali Morning, immediately after which dinner will be served.
Through this we hope to share fellowship and love with those that
have no family members around and at the same time teach our
little children the act of giving at Diw ali. We will need your help as
we organize reaching our neighborhood in order to invite them for
this joyful event.
Together we can share the heart of Lord, give hope and feast with
those that Rama would love to feast with.
Yours sincerely
SharadSaminde r
Secretary
4.4.3Email writing for Thank you
Sending a thank -you mail after an interview, networking
event, or any other event related to your job search or your
students life, is a great way to show your professionalism as well as
good attitude. It is also a way to maintain contact with people you
meet during your life time.
Thank -you emails aren't just for job searching. Sending an
email message to people who have helped you on the job or have
done something that will enhance your career is a good way to
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Subject: Thank you for your suggestions.
Dear Shyamsunde rPichai
Thank you for your suggestions on how to make our studies more
efficient. I agree that we should begin using an electronic
scheduling system and use the more and more resources
available on web. It is apparent that you have thought a lot about
implementing such a strategy, and I would like to talk with you
about it. I have forwarded this message to even my fellow students
who will also benefit from your ideas.
Thanks again for your message. The ideas and suggestions of
innovative, thinking people are always welcome.
Regards
SadashivAmrapurkar
4.4.4Email writing for Request for permission
A permission email is an electronic written in order to seek
permission for some event or other reason. The mail is written to
the higher authority by a perso no rag r o u po fp e o p l ei naf o r m a l
way. It is indeed very easy to write a permission mail and if you
want to write one, you can have a look at the below mentioned
sample. It will guide accordingly and clear all your doubts of writing
a permission mail.Perm ission mails can also be used to get the
permission for leave from school, workplace or to get approval of
some project work.
To:principal.kjsac@somaiya.edu
Subject: Requesting permission for leave.
Dear_ _ _ _ _ ( S i ro rM a d a m )
I Mr. ………(name of the sender) working as a
………………(designation of the sender) am writing this letter to
you …………………………(name of the receiver to kindly grant me
half day leave as I am moving out of station for a wedding of my
relative, I would not be working for 4 working days and hence I
want you to grant me permission for half day leave as well as four
day off. I assure you my absence will not cause any hindrance to
the ongoing project. Till then, hoping to get a positive reply from
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654.4.5Email writing for Sponsorship
Writing sponsorship emails is a persuasive art. Especially, if you're
hoping to get someone to sponsor your event or something else
you're doing, you should write a sponsorship mail. Your mail m ust
convince the sponsor that it’s worth contributing and clearly outline
the benefits the sponsor gets. Writing a proper sponsorship email
can make all of the difference between securing the sponsorship or
being ignored.
To:harshgoenka@express.net
Subject: Request for sponsorship.
Dear Harsh Goenka,
We have exciting news! We’re looking for sponsors to help fund
[insert area in need of funding]. And in return for sponsorship,
we’re offering multiple advertis ing opportunities throughout the
[insert year] season.
Would you consider sponsoring our club and donatingRs. 50000 to
help us in building our sports club? In demonstration of our
gratitude, Spardha Sports Club would like to offer you [insert
specific ad vertising/promotional incentive] in recognition of your
gift.
We hope you’re able to contribute and thank you for the
consideration.
To make a contribution, simply include your gift in the self -
addressed and stamped envelope included with this letter or hand -
deliver your donation to [sports club address].
Many thanks in advance for your sponsorship!
Sincerely,
4.5POINTS TO REMEMBER
Email Writing is an art.
Emails are quickest way of modern communication.
Write a meaningful subject line.
Keep the message focused and readable.
Avoid too many attachments.
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1.Imagine you have received an invitation mail for job interview.
Draft a reply of the email.
2.Your friend has m et with an accident recently. You could not
find a time to meet him personally. Draft a goodwill email
convincing your compulsion and conveying your regards for him
to recover soon and assuring him all the support he may need in
future.
3.Your colleague in your department is getting married soon. He
has invited you for his wedding ceremony to be held in Latur.
But, you already have an urgent and important meeting on the
same day which you cannot skip for any reason. Write an
appropriate goodwill email to him conveying the real situation
and wishes for his future married life.
4.Your college has organized a youth festival and you are looking
for sponsors. Write an email to the potential sponsorer seeking
his help in financing your events.
Write a thanking emai lt oy o u rf r i e n dw h oh a sh e l p e dy o ui n
completing your project work.

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Unit -5
REPORT WRITING
UNIT STRUCTURE
5.0 Objectives
5.1 Introduction
5.2 Need for Report Writing
5.2.1Helps to Communicate
5.2.2Helps in Documentation
5.2.3Helps in Decision Making
5.2.4Helps in Comprehension of the Problems or Issues
5.2.5Helps for Further References
5.3 General Characteristics of Good Report
5.3.1 Precision
5.3.2Accuracy
5.3.3Relevance
5.3.4Simple Language
5.3.5Conciseness
5.3.6Grammatical Accuracy
5.3.7Unbiased Recommendation
5.3.8Attractive Presentation
5.4 Structure of Report
5.4.1Clarifying Terms of Reference
5.4.2 Planning Work
5.4.3 Co llecting Information
5.4.4Organizing and Structuring Your Information
5.4.5 Writing First Draft
5.4.6Checking and Re -Drafting
5.5 Steps for Report Writing
5.6 Eye-witness Report
5.7 Activity Report
5.8 Newspaper Repor t
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5.1 OBJECTIVES
To help the students understand the importance of developing
skills and techniques of report writing.
To acquaint learners with various areas of report writing that are
helpful in organizat ional work.
To introduce learners to the process of writing a good report.
5.2 INTRODUCTION
Report writing is an art which needs development of special
skills and techniques. It is a highly structured document written in a
formal style. Generally, most of the reports are based on your
reading and some form of practical work, such as an investigation,
survey, experiment or review of the practice in other organizations.
It is written with specific purpose, to inform, to persuade, or to offer
recommendation s. They are also produced for a particular kind of
audiences. Conclusions in the reports are generally drawn based
on their findings and may suggest a course of action or areas of
further research. Therefore, the reports are aimed to set out the
issue and explain why the activity was undertaken, to describe what
was done and how it was done or to present the findings,
conclusions, and any recommendations.
According to the Oxford English Dictionary, "a report is a
statement of the results of an investigatio no ro fa n ym a t t e ro n
which definite information is required".
Formal report writing in professional, technical and its
business contexts have evolved certain conventions regarding
format, style, referencing and other characteristics. These vary in
detai ls between organizations. Reports are a highly structured form
of writing often following conventions that have been laid down to
produce a common format. Structure and convention in written
reports stress the process by which the information was gathered
as much as the information itself.
5.3NEED FOR REPORT WRITING
Reports are impartial part of official communication
especially for documentation. In academics, the report writing is
also significant right from writing reports of the pupils to the teacher
and in business environment when it grows in its complexity, the
importance of skillful communication becomes essential in the
pursuit of institutional goals. In addition to the need to develop
adequate statistical skills, you will find it necessary to ef fectively
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little use to formulate solutions to business problems without
transmitting this information to others involved in the problem -
solving process. But in academics, some courses require students
to present their ideas as a report as opposed to the usual essay
format. Report writing is a useful skill to possess because this form
of communicating information and ideas is commonly used in all
industries.
Academic report writing wil l help you develop these skills in
a disciplined way, enabling you to write reports to a high standard.
The importance of effectively communicating the results of your
statistical study cannot be overemphasized. The following
paragraphs will illustrate the need to write effective and impressive
reports. But this section of the study material is to help the students
to understand the basics of report writing. Therefore, the discussion
on the significance will be limited to the basic report writing skills
instead of the advanced one.
5.3.1Helps to Communicate
Most business decisions involve the cooperation and
interaction of several individuals in a given working environment.
Sometimes dozens of colleagues and co -workers strive in unison to
realize mutual g oals. Lines of communication must therefore be
maintained to facilitate these joint efforts. Without communicating
ideas and thoughts it would be impossible to identify common
objectives and purposes necessary for successful operations.
Without communicati on and the team effort it permits, the
successful completion of any important project can be jeopardized.
Some aspects of the project would be unnecessarily replicated
while other tasks would be left unattended. Further, in the absence
of adequate communic ation, colleagues would find themselves
working at cross purposes and perhaps pursuing opposing goals.
What one team member may have worked to assemble one day, a
second team member may dismantle the next day.W i t h o u t
communication the chances for a succes sful outcome of any
business endeavor are significantly reduced. Besides, the reports
are the created documents based on the observations and finding
which in turn help the information to disseminate to the target
reader.
5.3.2Helps in Documentation
Reports are written documents and can be stored
permanently. Writing of these reports is done in structured and
preconditioned protocols and thus helping in creating the detailed
matter. Analyzing, monitoring data and reaching conclusions is
perhaps one of th e most challenging and important stages of a
monitoring and documentation and reports make it easy. It requires
skill to examine what could be voluminous amounts of information
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process of syn thesizing information, identifying patterns, themes,
relationships, and causes. It requires continual verification, and
reports help to identify information that fits or contradicts the pattern
as it emerges. Thus, reports help in documenting not only the data,
facts, files or graphical information but also help them to analyse it
and document them perfectly.
5.3.3Helps in Decision Making
The written reports communicate information which has
been compiled as a result of research and analysis of data and o f
issues. Often reports are structured in a way that reflects the
information finding process and the writing up of the findings: that
is, summary of the contents, introduction or background, methods,
results, discussion, conclusion and/or recommendations.
The inclusion of recommendations is one reason why reports
area common form of writing in industry, as the informed
recommendations are useful for decision making. For example, a
local municipal council which has received a development
application may co mmission a heritage consultant to prepare a
report on the heritage values of the proposed development site.
The recommendations of the report will be taken into account by
the council when considering the development application. Thus, it
helps the council to take appropriate decision.
5.3.4Helps in Comprehension of the Problems or Issues
Reports are documents explaining the context and the
background of the problem and seeking an enquiry into the
possible causes and stimulating factors for it. It means these
documents help to find out the problem, its extent and the future
damage that it may cause. Besides, it will address the measures
we may undertake to avert the spread of problem. Thus, Albert
Einstein once said, “If I were given one hour to save the planet, I
would spend 59 minutes defining the problem and one minute
resolving it.” While that may sound extreme, it does highlight the
importance of defining problems. It also hints at some interesting
facts: A well -defined problem often contains its own solution within
it, and that solution is usually quite obvious and straightforward. By
defining problems properly, you make them easier to solve, which
means saving time, money and resources.
5.3.5Helps for Further References
Reports consist of research or observed data which is a
valuable resource, usually requiring much time and money to be
produced. Many data have a significant value beyond usage for the
original research. Besides, the same collected facts and figures
encourage scientific enquiry and d ebate which in turn helps in
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maximizing the transparency and accountability. In addition, the
stored reports enable scrutiny of researc h findings encouraging the
improvement and validation of research methods. It results in to
reduction of cost of duplicating data collection and increases the
impact and visibility of research.
Also, the reports provide a direct credit to the researcher as
a research output in its own right and it provides important
resources for education and training. Thus, the reports disseminate
information and made easily accessible to users means that many
individual or institutions are keen to share reports to incr ease the
impact and visibility of their findings.
5.4GENERAL CHARACTERISTICS OF GOOD
REPORT
Report provides factual information and is intended to
document the progress of one or the other activities like finding out
the feasibility, investigating a mat ter, finding out the various
reasons for the failure of the execution of policy or eye witness
report or news report. Thus, the purpose of report may influence
the characteristics of an ideal report. These objectives of the report
can be achieved only if the following qualities are incorporated:
5.4.1 Precision :
Ar e p o r tn e e d sto adopt clear and correct approach to
include all the facts and figures for the purpose of the study. The
reporter has to be very clear about the exact and definite purpose
of wri ting the report. His/her investigation, analysis and
recommendations into the study undertaken or the investigation
sought will be key to a successful report. So, precision of a report
provides the unity to the report and makes it a valuable document
for b est usage.
5.4.2 Accuracy :
The accuracy is the prime feature of any report as it gives
the authenticity of the facts and figures mentioned in the report.
Hence, most written reports should avoid using overly complicated
language. If a report is to persua de, brief or justify, its message
must be clear. Furthermore, the factual presentation of data should
not be swamped with sophisticated, lengthy sentences. So, avoid
using unnecessary jargon. This confuses even the most informed
reader. Ensure that your ab breviations are standardized .A l lt o o
often authors invent their own jargon to ease the pressure on
writing things in full. Be cautious of confusing your reader.
Information contained in a report must be based on accurate fact.
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5.4.3 Relevancy :
The accurate facts and other details even though they are
correct, they should also be relevant to the matter under
investigation or study. Irrelevant facts make a report confusing and
likely to be misleading to make proper decision. Relevancy of the
facts, especially, pertaining to the matter that the study has been
undertaken.
5.4.4Simple Language
Most reports should avoid the use of subjective language.
For e xample, to report on a change of colour from a "stunning
green to a beautiful blue" is to project your own values onto a
measurable outcome. What does the term "beautiful" mean to you?
What will it mean to your reader? Such subjective or personal
language commonly has no place in the more objective field of
report writing. Therefore, the simple language is just another
essential features of a good report. A good report is written in a
simple language avoiding vague and unclear words. The language
of the report should not be influenced by the writer's emotion or
goal. The message of a good report should be self -explanatory.
5.4.5 Conciseness
A good report should be concise but it does not mean that a
report can never be long. Rather it means that a good report or a
business report is one that transmits maximum information with
minimum words. It avoids unnecessary detail and includes
everything which is significant and necessary to present proper
information.
5.4.6Grammatical Accuracy
A good report is free from errors. Any faulty construction of a
sentence may make its meaning different to the reader's mind. And
sometimes it may become confusing or ambiguous.
5.4.7Unbiased Rec ommendation
The recommendation is a final outcome of the report.
Recommendation on report usually makes effect on the reader
mind. So, if recommendations are made at the end of a report, they
must be impartial and objective. They should come as logical
conclusion for investigation and analysis.
5.4.8Attractive Presentation
Presentation of a report is also a factor which should be
considered for a good report. A good report provides a catchy and
smart look and creates attention of the reader. Structure, c ontent,
language, typing and presentation style of a good report should be
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The inclusion of above factors features or characteristics
make a good report to be effective and fruitful. It also helps to
achieve the report goal. A reporter, who is making the report,
always should be careful about those factors to make his report a
good one.
5.4 LAYOUT OF REPORT
The layout of the report may vary from purpose to purpose.
The following table will give you a deep insight into the various
elements of the reports according to purpose:
Business Report Laboratory
ReportNews Report Activity
Report
Title page
Acknowledgements
Contents
Abstract or
summary
Introduction
Methodology
Results or findings
Discussion
Conclusion and
recommendations
References
AppendicesTitle
Aim
Apparatus
Procedures
Precautions
Observations
ConclusionsHeadline
Subhead line
Dateline
Introductory
Para
Lead Para
Concluding
ParaTitle
Duration
Place of
Activity
Executive
Summar y
Details of the
Activity
Conclusion
5.5 STEPS FOR REPORT WRITING
The following stages are involved in writing a report:
5.5.1 Clarifying Terms of Reference
The terms of reference of a report are a guiding statement
used to define the scope of your inv estigation. You must be clear
from the start what you are being asked to do. You will probably
have been given an assignment from your tutor but you may need
to discuss this further to find out the precise subject and purpose of
the report. Why have you be en asked to write it?
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5.5.2 Planning Work :
Careful planning will help you to write a clear, concise a nd
effective report, giving adequate time to each of the developmental
stages prior to submission.
• Consider the report as a whole
• Break down the task of writing the report into various parts.
• How much time do you have to write the report?
• How can this be divided up into the various planning stages?
• Set yourself deadlines for the various stages.
Draw up an outline structure for your report and set the work
within a sensible time scale for completion by the given deadline.
Some of the most time -consuming parts of the process are
collecting and selecting your information, and checking and revising
your report.
5.5.3 Collecting Information
There are a number of questions you need to ask yourself at
this stage: -
What is the information you need?
Whe re do you find it?
How much do you need?
How shall you collect it?
In what order will you arrange it?
You may have much of the information you need already
such as results from a laboratory experiment or descriptions of your
methods of data collection. Ho wever, there may be other material
which is needed such as background information on other research
studies, or literature surveys. You may need to carry out some
interviews or make a visit to the university library to collect all the
information you need.
• Make a list of what information you need.
• Make an action plan stating how you are going to gather this.
5.5.4 Organizing and Structuring Your Information
One helpful way of organizing your information into topics is to
brainstorm your ideas into a ‘ spider diagram.’
Write the main theme in the centre of a piece of paper.
Write down all the ideas and keywords related to your topic
starting from the centre and branching out along lines of
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When you have finished, highlight any related ideas and then
sort topics.
Some ideas will form main headings, and others will be sub -
sections under these headings.
You should then be able to see a pattern remerging and be able
to arrange your main headings in a logical order
5.5.5 Writing the First Draft
Collect the data and compile it as per the requirement of the
purpose for which the report is written. Besides, follow the
principles given in earlier section.
5.5.6 Checking and Re -Draftin g.
Once you have written the first draft of your report you will
need to check it through. It is probably sensible to leave it on your
desk for a day or so if you have the time. This will make a clear
break from the intensive writing period, allowing you t ov i e wy o u r
work more objectively.
Assess your work in the following areas:
Structure
Content
Style
5.6 EYE -WITNESS REPORT
An eyewitness report is a first -person account of an event
you personally witnessed. The goal is to provide details about the
event in a clear, concise manner, giving as many details as you
recall as accurately as possible.
Eyewitness reports are often crucial to solving crimes or
providing background on newsworthy stories. Eyewitness reports
are also used as part of incident repor ts at workplaces such as
schools, nursing homes, jails and other facilities requiring
employees to monitor sensitive situations.
Follow the tips given below while writing the eyewitness report:
Reconstruct the events and the order in which they occurred as
clearly as you can before you write anything down.
Write your eyewitness report in the first person.
Describe only what you actually witnessed.
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Include specific time and date information when writing about
the incident, your full name and contact information, and the
names of anyone who might have been present who can back
up your account.
If you have access to information from som eone who is
unavailable to write a report, include the information but indicate
that the information was obtained from someone else.
Nepal Earthquake -Eyewitness Report
ByLizSatow, World Vision Country Director forNepal.
Buildings and walls across Kathmandu
have collapsed although it is hard to tell
how serious and extensive the damage
is. We know that dozens, maybe
hundreds, of people have been killed
and injured. Many people are too
frightened to go into the buildings due to
fear they will collaps e with aftershocks.
People are very worried and have for a
long time feared the big quake.
The epicentre of the quake struck is
near Lamjung, where we have a project site. It is about 180 km
from Kathmandu. All Lamjung staff are accounted for. Telecom
connections are up and down making it difficult to find out how bad
things are.
World Vision has been working in districts across Nepal with local
authorities to identify disaster risks and help communities prepare
for the worst. There has been a special foc us on keeping schools
safe from natural hazards like landslides, flooding and quakes.
World Vision also works with other agencies to improve disaster
risk reduction by working with networks of children to give them a
voice on disaster risk reduction and in fluence government policies
to improve safety. World Vision is the lead agency in Disaster
Management and Climate Change Adaptation task group.
Source: https://www.wvi .org/asia -pacific/article/nepal -earthquake -
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5.7 ACTIVITY REPORT
A progress report (also known as an activity report or status
report) is requested by those who are interested in the past,
present, and future of s omething you are working on. Unlike a more
formal research report, a progress report can be brief, with no need
for cross -references or detailed front and back matter. A progress
report can even be delivered verbally, although most organizations
also requi re something in writing. Often a template will be provided,
but occasionally you may be asked to draft something on the fly.
Follow the tips given below while writing the eyewitness report:
Plan your report.
Understand the time -frame you will report on. By definition, a
progress/activity report is not a summary of your entire project.
It covers a specific time segment.
Define the purpose, audience, and format for your report. Even
in a short, informal report, the good old “reporter’s questions”
are a goo d starting point. Two important things that should be
considered:
Find out the interested stakeholders for your report
Structure your report logically. A structure will help you cover all
the highlights. Arrange the report into Introduction, Summary
and Re sults of Activities (past, present), Future Activities and
Conclusion.
Draft a report
Proofread it carefully and review, edit, and proof your report.
Example: Your college recently has organised a Leadership
Camp for all presidents and secretaries of the various clubs in
your college.Being the secretary of the college magazine you
too attended the same. Write a report for the college
magazine.
Activity Report : Integrated Leadership Camp
The weekend of 27 -29th July this year will forever be etched in the
minds of the 50 participants who attended the Integrated
Leadership Camp organised by the Co -curricular Unit of K J
Somaiya College of Arts and Commerce, Vidyavihar, Mumbai. The
two-day two night camp, held at college, within a city of Mumbai,
was a c ompulsory activity for all presidents and secretaries of the
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Although the students were accompanied by several professors, al l
activities were conducted by youth leaders from the campus.
Most of the students, who are in Form Four this year, were very
excited to attend the camp. Upon arrival, they were immediately
whisked off to the seminar room where they were given a briefin g
on the rules and regulations at the campsite by the facilitators.
Then, they were put into groups of five and asked to erect their own
tents.
Luckily for my group, we had the President of the NCC Club with
us. In no time, he had instructed us on how t op u tu pt h et e n t .
Unfortunately, some of the other groups were struggling with their
tents and seeing their dismal efforts some of us decided to help
them. Apparently, this was the first test of our teamwork skills and
fortunately, many of us passed with flying colours. After dinner, we
had a group dynamics activity, where we had to come up with
names, logos and jingles for our groups.
The second day of the camp started off with an early morning
exercise session at 5.30am. The two energetic facilitators, Tina and
Ashraf, took us through a rigorous exercise routine. Many of us who
barely exercise knew what to expect over the next few days –
muscle cramps. After the one -hour aerobic session, we jogged
through Ghatkopar locality, which was a pale shadow of it sd a y t i m e
hustle and bustle. The early morning exercise was invigorating and
refreshing. We had enough time for a quick shower and breakfast,
before we took part in more group activities.
The highlight of the camp was a night hike in the surrounding
jungle. The facilitators led us deep into the jungle and made us sit
all by ourselves. The half hour spent alone was aimed at making us
brave and resilient. Though many of us were initially hesitant and
skeptical about this activity, it was indeed an insightf ul experience.
On the final morning, we had a hearty breakfast, which was
followed by a feedback session. During this session, we were given
the opportunity to voice our feelings and opinions regarding the
camp. Many of the participants gave constructive feedback on what
the camp had taught them. We learnt about the importance of
teamwork, consideration, tolerance and understanding. Most
importantly, we learnt that good leadership is responsible
leadership.
Reported by,
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5.8 NEWS PAPER REPORT
A news report is a factual account of an event. It is meant to
tell the reader about the details of something that has happened.
News reports are an efficient way to report the events taking place
locally and around the world.
The structure of the news report is as follows:
1.Headline
a.Catches your attention
b.Sums up the story
2.Byline
a.Writer’s name
b.Writer’s Specialty, e.g. sports, food, crime, current events
3.Dateline
a.Where the story begins
b.The day and time of the story
c.The sources of the news.
4.Lead Para
a.The opening section
b.Gives most important information
c.Should answer most of the 5W's
5.Body
a.Supplies detail
b.Most important details come first
c.Simple true statements
6.Quotation
a.What someone actually said
b.Adds accuracy
c.Adds “at the scene” feeling
Read the following news report from the leading English Daily:
SpaceX launches rocket that can be re -used 10 times
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forward in re -usability for the California -based aerospace company.
The satellite will offer video and communications coverage over
India, Bangladesh and its terr itorial waters in the Bay of Bengal, as
well as Nepal, Bhutan, Sri Lanka, the Philippines, and Indonesia.
The rocket is designed to require far less maintenance and
refurbishment between flights, and is certified to carry humans to
space later this year wh en Space X launches its Dragon crew
capsule to the International Space Station.
The Block 5 Falcon 9 rocket’s main goal for its maiden mission was
to propel a communications satellite for Bangladesh, called
Bangabandhu Satellite -1, to a geostationary tran sfer orbit roughly
35,000km above Earth. “In the continuous advancement of
Bangladesh another milestone is added today,” said Bangladesh
PM Sheikh Hasina in a video address
aired on Space X’s launch webcast.
“With the launch of Bangabandhu -1, we
are hoisti ng our national flag into space.”
The rocket is built to refly up to 10 times
with minimal refurbishment, Space X
CEO Elon Musk told reporters ahead of
the launch. AFP
The Falcon 9 lifting off from at Cape
Canaveral in Florida on Friday. The
rocket, also c ertified to carry humans to
space later this year when Space X
launches its Dragon capsule, is carrying
a communications satellite for
Bangladesh.
Source: Times of India Dated 18thMay, 2018 .
5.9 POINTS TO REMEMBER
The reports contain facts and figures.
Reports are significant as they have become the part business
set up.
Reports should be precise, accurate, relevant, in simple
language, concise, grammatically accurate, have unbiased
recommendations and attractive presentation.
The layout of the report varies from purpose to purpose.
Eyewitness report is written in first report.
News report is written with definite format.
Activity report is a progressive report.
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5.10 CHECK YOUR PROGRESS
1.Explain the concept of a report? Why is the significance of
report writing to modern business organisation?
2.How do you organise a report logically?
3.What are the different forms of report writing? Explain them.
4.Bring out the salient features of an Ideal Report.
5.What is a Activity Report? What purpose does it serve the
organisations?
6.You are team leader of your bank. Your bank has introduced
new deposit scheme. Draft a activity report to be submitted to
the Manager.
7.Draft the half yearly progress report of a training of your
students at NCC camp for new recruits of to yo ur battalion of
which you have been appointed to train them.
8.The workers in a large industry have been asking for a rise in
wages and housing accommodation. They are protesting for
long. Write news report on it.
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Unit-6
STORY WRITING AND DIALOGUE
WRITING
UNIT STRUCTURE
6.0 Objectives
6.1 Introduction
6.2 Story Writing
6.2.1Think About Your Reader
6.2.2Three -act Structure
6.2.3An Attention -grabbing O pening
6.2.4Extended M etaphors
6.2.5Interesting Details About Setting and Location
6.2.6 Editing
6.2.7 And Finally… Record your Ideas
6.3 Dialogue Writing
6.4 Check your Progress
6.0 OBJECTIVES
1.To make the students aware of the art of story writing
2.To introduce the students dialogue writing.
3. To prepare them to do the practice of preparing for the
examination.
6.1 INTRODUCTION
This unit will make learners familiar with the concept of story
writing and dialogue writing. Creative thinking and creative writing,
involves use of imagination in organized way. It is important to be
creative in communication. We usually think that imagination
means to to be without restriction. However, imaginative and
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6.2 STORY WRITING
STORY WRITING
Dear friends as you know the syllabus, you have to write
either a short story with the help of given points ,o rad i a l o g u eo na
given topic. This unit will ensure to perfect you in writing both. Read
the unit neatly and follow the hints given below.
Creative writing by definition, involves being ‘creative’:
making things up, letting your imagination run wild. Writing
dialogues and short stories is about being factual and objective,
communicating ideas and arguments in the clearest way possible
and attempting to enhance the reader’s knowledge, rather than
their imagination.
1. Think about your reader
With cre ative writing, as with any kind of writing, your reader
is your most important consideration. You need to know and
understand whom you’re writing for if you’re to do a good job of
keeping them interested. Let’s think for a moment about the kind of
person y ou’re writing for when you’re writing an essay and what
you need to do to write specifically for them:
Teachers or university lecturers –they’re going to be
marking your essay, so it needs to answer the question effectively.
They’ve set the question and they probably have a pretty good idea
of how you’re going to answer it –so be original and unpredictable;
catch them by surprise with an unusual approach or structure.
They’re going to be reading many other responses to the
same question –so they may we ll be bored by the time they get to
yours. Keep them interested!
They’re probably going to be pressed for time –so they
won’t have time to reread badly written passages to try to
understand what you’re getting at. Keep your writing easy to read,
succinct and to the point.
What all these points boil down to is the importance of
keeping your reader interested in what you have to say. Since
creative writing is all about holding the reader’s interest, there must
be some lessons to be learned from it and tech niques that can be
applied within the more limited style constraints of the academic
essay. We’ll now turn to what these are.
2. Three -act structure
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‘acts’ aren’t as distinct as acts in a play, as one follows seamlessly
on from another and the audience wouldn’t consciously realise that
one act had ended and another began. The structure refers to a
plotline that looks something li ke this:
Set-up–establishes the characters, how they relate to each
other, and the world they inhabit. Within this first ‘act’, a dramatic
occurrence called an ‘inciting incident’ takes place (typically around
19 minutes into a film) involving the princ ipal character. They try to
deal with it, but this results in another dramatic occurrence called a
‘turning point’. This sets the scene for the rest of the story.
Confrontation –the turning point in the previous ‘act’ becomes
the central problem, which the main character attempts to resolve –
usually with plenty of adversity thrown their way that hampers their
efforts. In a murder mystery, for example, this act would involve the
detective trying to solve the murder. The central character –with
the help of supporting characters –undergoes a journey and
develops their knowledge, skills or character to a sufficient degree
to be able to overcome the problem.
Resolution –the climax of the story, in which the drama reaches a
peak, the problem is overcome, and loose ends are tied up.
This structure sounds all very well for made -up stories, but
what has it got to do with a story writing? The key similarities here
are:
The central argument of your story is the equivalent of the
main character.
The essay equi valent of the set -up and resolution are the
introduction and conclusion.
The inciting incident in a story encourages you to get to the
point early on in the story.
The equivalent of character development in the second act is
developing your argument.
So,a p p l y i n gt h et h r e e -act structure to a story gives you
something like this:
Set-up–the introduction. This establishes what you’re talking
about, setting the scene. The ‘inciting incident’ could be the
introduction of evidence that contradicts a common theory, or the
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Confrontation –you discuss the different problems surrounding the
topic you’re writing about. You develop the argument using various
bits of evidence, moving towards a n overall conclusion.
The Conclusion -You summarise and resolve the argument with
your own opinion, by coming down on one side or the other, having
weighed up the evidence you’ve discussed. You could perhaps tie
up loose ends by offering an alternative ex planation for evidence
that doesn’t sit with your conclusion.
Using this structure keeps you focused on the central point,
and stops you from waffling, because everything you write is
working towards resolving your argument. The use of the inciting
incide nt in the first ‘act’ encourages you to get to the point early on
in your essay, thereby keeping the reader interested. The principles
of good plot -writing are centred around the connection between
different events that show cause and effect, and this cent ral tenet of
the three -act structure has obvious parallels with the way in which
essays work through presenting evidence in support of arguments.
3. An attention -grabbing opening
A murder mystery novel might start with the murder and then
establish the b uild-up in flashbacks. An oft -spouted piece of advice
in creative writing is to use an attention -grabbing opening. One way
of doing this is to start with a ‘flashback’, which could disrupt the
chronology of events by transporting the reader directly back t ot h e
midst of the action, so that the story begins with maximum
excitement. In a murder mystery, for instance, the writer might skip
a slow build -up and instead use the murder itself to form the
opening of the novel, with the rest of the story charting th ee f f o r t so f
the detective to uncover the perpetrator and perhaps telling the
events prior to the murder in a series of flashbacks.
4. Extended metaphors
Creative writing often makes use of extended metaphors.
For example, when Shakespeare wrote the pass age in Romeo and
Juliet referring to “It is the East, and Juliet is the sun!” he was using
an extended metaphor. With this in mind, it’s time to revisit a point
we made in a previous article about writing more original essays, in
which we argued that, rath er than battling on with trying to explain a
complex concept in a straightforward way, it might be easier to use
an analogy to convey the meaning by drawing comparisons, which
people find easier to understand. A metaphor is a kind of analogy,
so the simila rities with creative writing are strong here. In our
previous article we used the example of radioactive decay. An
analogy for this is the pressure with which water escapes from a
hole in a bucket. It does so exponentially, just as radioactive
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whatever is being depleted, which results in an exponential rate of
decay. This concept is so much easier to explain using the analogy
of water fl owing from a hole in a bucket, as you give your reader
something familiar to visualise in order to explain a concept with
which they are unfamiliar.
5. Interesting details about setting and location
Another way of keeping your reader interested is to bri ng
your essay to life with details about setting and location, just as
creative writers do. Essays can become quite dry if you focus solely
on the academic problems, but you can make them more
interesting by peppering them with details. This may not work q uite
so well for a scientific essay, but it’s certainly relevant for some
humanities subjects, in particular English literature, history and
archaeology. For example, an essay about the Roman emperor
Augustus could mention that he lived a famously modest l ifestyle,
quoting details from Roman writers and archaeological evidence
that support this: Suetonius mentions his “low bed” (interesting
because of what it says about accepted standards of Roman beds!)
and coarse bread and cheese diet, and the relatively small and
non-lavish remains of his house on the Palatine Hill in Rome back
up the idea of his having lived a modest life.
Incidental details like these can actually prove to be more
significant than you initially realise, and you can use them to build
your argument; in the case of Augustus, for example, his modest
lifestyle is particularly important when seen in the context of
Rome’s troubled history with kings. As he gradually acquired more
power and became Rome’s first emperor, he had to avoid coming
across as being too ‘regal’, and the little details we know about his
way of life are significant in light of this. So, not only have you
brought your essay to life, but you’ve raised an interesting point,
too.
6. Editing
Few writers get it right first time . Once you’ve written a first
draft, read through it and think about whether the order of your
points is optimal and whether what you’ve written actually makes
sense. It’s easy in the age of computers to chop and change –you
can simply copy and paste part of your essay into another part
where it might fit better, and then make minor changes to your
wording so that it flows. After you’ve finished editing, have a final
read through and check that you’re happy with the wording. Don’t
forget to proofread to en sure that your spelling and grammar is
impeccable!
7. And finally… record your ideas
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You can adopt the same principle for your es say-writing, because
you never know when the inspiration might strike. Have a think
about your essay topic when you’re out and about; you’d be
surprised what occurs to you when you’re away from your normal
place of study.
As you can see, there are more si milarities between two
apparently unrelated kinds of writing than you might have realised.
It is, of course, possible to go too far with the creative writing idea
when you’re essay -writing: literary devices aren’t always
appropriate, and your story still n eeds to retain objectivity and
conform to the more formal conventions of academic writing. But
there are certainly techniques to be borrowed from creative writing
that will help your story stand out from the crowd and give your
teacher or lecturer a welcom ebreak from the monotony of
story12 marking.
6.3 DIALOGUE WRITING
Realistic dialogue written well can advance a story and flesh
out characters while providing a break from straight exposition.
Writing realistic dialogue does not come easily for everyone,
though, and few things pull a reader out of a story faster than bad
dialogue.
It takes time to develop a good ear for dialogue, but following
some simple rules and avoiding some obvious pitfalls can make a
huge difference.
Listen to How People Talk
Having a sense of natural speech patterns is essential to
good dialogue. Pay attention to the expressions people use and the
music of everyday conversation by paying attention to the way
people talk. Note how people can maintain conversations without
complete sentences and sometimes by even finishing others'
sentences. Eavesdropping is not a crime, so go ahead and listen to
how people communicate with one another.
Don't Be 100 Percent Realistic
People talk in stops and starts, and they pause with
nonsense wo rds like "um" and "er." Frequently they talk over one
another. As much as you're trying to emulate realistic speech
patterns, the dialogue still needs to be readable. Alfred Hitchcock
said a good story is, "life with the dull parts taken out." This very
much applies to dialogue. A transcription of a conversation would
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Don't Give Too Much Information a tO n c e
It should never be obvious to readers that they're being fed
important facts. Let the story unfold naturally. Readers can be
trusted to remember details from earlier in the story, so you don't
have to rush to tell them everything all at once. People who know
each other leave a lot unsaid, so exposition still will be necessary to
share some important facts.
Break up Dialogue with Action
Remind readers that your characters are physical human
beings by grounding their dialogue in the physical world. Su ch
details also help break up the words on the page. It can be as
simple as referencing that characters are standing on the deck of a
cabin cruiser. Long periods of dialogue are easier for readers when
broken up by descriptions. The same holds true for lon gp e r i o d so f
descriptions, they need to be broken up with dialogue.
Don't Overdo Dialogue Tags
Veering too much beyond "he said/she said" only draws
attention to the tags —and you want readers focused on your
compelling dialogue, not your ability to thin k of synonyms for "said."
You also need to trust that readers will be able to follow the
conversation without attribution after each statement when it is part
of a back -and-forth conversation between characters.
Stereotypes, Profanity, and Slang
Be aware of falling back on stereotypes, and be sure to use
profanity and slang sparingly or you risk distracting or alienating
your readers. Anything that takes readers out of the fictional world
that you're working hard to create should be avoided.
Read Widely
Pay attention to why things work or don't work when you're
reading. Take the time to note examples of when you are taken out
of a story's action and then try to identify why? Where did you stop
believing in a character? Or, when did the character really ju mp off
the page, and how did the dialogue help accomplish that? Again,
note when this happens and try to identify what the writer was
doing to achieve this. In other words, start reading like a writer.
Punctuate Dialogue Correctly
The rules for punctuatin g dialogue can be confusing. Many
writers need help getting them right; especially in the beginning.
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prose. You may have written beautiful dialogue but you don't want
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Cut to the Chase
Cutting greetings and other small talk is a great place to start
paring down your dialogue. If you omit all the hellos and goodbyes,
you get your characters into t he scene faster and allow them to
start telling your story through language and action.
Keep It Short
Try to keep each instance of dialogue to one sentence.
When you get to the second sentence, it’s likely your character has
become an “explainer,” deliver ing expository information instead of
acting as a dynamic, believable character.
Any time you find yourself giving a character multiple
sentences of dialogue, ask yourself if there’s a natural way to put all
the important information into one sentence. Or , see if it can be
broken up and inserted into a few different places in the
conversation. You can also see if another character can deliver
some of the information.
Let It Flow
When you write the first draft of a scene, let the dialogue
flow. Pour it out like cheap champagne. You can make it sparkle
later, but first, you have to get it down on paper. This technique will
allow you to come up with lines you probably would never have
thought of if you tried to get it right the first time.
Be an Improvisatio nal Actor
In the privacy of your own home, improvise a scene as
though you are both characters in the scene. If the two characters
are in conflict, start an argument. Allow a slight pause as you
switch, giving yourself time to come up with a response in ea ch
character’s voice.
6.4 CHECK YOUR PROGRESS
1. Write a brief dialogue between you and a stranger who meets
you in a train while traveling to a hill station.
2. Write a short story with the points given bellow.
i.You receive pocket money Rs. 1000 fro my o u rf a t h e r
ii.You are thrifty by nature -you don’t want spending
unnecessarily
iii.Savings
iv.You invest in Mutual funds with the help of a friend’s father
v.gift your father a motor bike after four years
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